sterfryboy

Hello there sterfryboy, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your aspirant plot...

Structure:
   This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have some structures but they are below par for an aspirant. I recommend making a larger structure on your plot to make it more appealing. Make sure it has depth. Depth is the layers within a structure. you can add depth by incorporating slabs, stairs, fences, trap doors, and buttons. If you need a visual example of depth, please go to /warp depthtutorial. You also do not have a palette for your structures. Palette is the blocks you choose to build all the structures on your plot. Basically it the same blocks you build with for the structures. I recommend keeping the same blocks throughout the plot to make it coherent.
Terrain:
   This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. You have some interesting terrain, but it is not executed very well. Try making the cliff overhang more thicker and make it flow into the side. It is all about it looking realistic. Also, the bottom part of the cliff is very dull, try making it more interesting as well.
Organics:
   This is anything living like trees and animals. You have a tree, but it could use some work. First off, your mega tree is very unproportional. Try making the roots a bit smaller and the branches a bit bigger. also, add more leaves into it. The leaves should not be in a certain shape, like a sphere, but instead spread randomly.
Other:
   This is anything that does not fit into the three above categories. You have a lot of empty space all around your plot. I recommend adding some more trees, smaller structures, or maybe some terrain to fill those spots. Also, you don't really have a theme for your plot. You have some Mideval theme on your plot, but some random beach blankets and umbrellas. Make sure the entire plot fits together.

Fix the thing mentioned above and your good to go! Good Luck<3
Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod