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- Novice Review:
- Great plot and i like the changes youve made since my last review! The candy apples are super cute and so is the chocolate lake :D They trees look smoother and theres even a mini tree and thats great for variation :D
- But the structures still look quite flat and thats something we like to avoid! Add more layers to it to make it look more interesting and to give it "depth"! Also dont forget to detail your structures! Use slabs and stairs or fence posts for detailing :)
- Not quite there yet but youre gettin there :D DW!
- Good luck!
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