Tejanth3

Hello Tejanth3, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot....

Structure:
   This is anything involving houses to towers to castles. Your structures are fine for an aspirant, but I recommend when you are ranked up, try building more interesting structures because this won't get you passed apprentice. You can build big structures, but make sure they have more interesting depth and creativity. Repeating the same pattern over and over again on a gig structure isn't too eye catching and doesn't show a lot of skill. You have a great opportunity to add depth on all the structures you have built, but it seems like it is lacking a bit, especially for an aspirant. Try adding some more (interesting) depth and this will be good to go.
Terrain:
   This is anything involving the ground, like kills and cliffs. Your terrain is very interesting so that is a plus! There are three things that needs to be fixed though. One thing is that some of your terrain is flat. Yes both the cliffs and the island above your plot. It has some good places to add some more interesting terrain, but instead they are left flat. I recommend fixing that. Secondly, the cliff at the bottom of your plot needs to be fixed. I can see the spheres you have used to make the platform in the first place, so I suggest making it more realistic and fixing this. Lastly, the one thing that needs to be fixed the most is the bottom part of the floating island. Realistic islands do not have a patterns, nor are they perfect spheres. Try fixing it to where the island is not symmetrical.
Organics:
   This is anything living, like animals and trees. Your trees are great! one thing I recommend watching out for is the proportions. The roots are way to big and long to match the branches and trunk, and the branches are too think to match the trunk. Make sure they are proportional and smooth, instead of stiff. You can also add some more leaves instead of having some of the branches with two leaves on them.

I wish you lots of lick Tej<33333
-Tayter_Kat  |  Octovon Mod