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  2. 40 29 Singularity is far more intimate that this metaphor. The Singularity is far more intimate than this metaphor. The
  3. 41 11 imperfectly knowledgeable, relative powerlessness, imperfectly knowledgeable, relatively powerless,
  4. 58 13 may become increasing obvious. The Singularity may be the may become increasingly obvious. The Singularity may be the
  5. 64 25 grasping the possibility of the evolution God. Going to the grasping the possibility of the evolution of God. Going to the
  6. 65 7 available is a matter of total indifference. Tradition available is a matter of total indifference. Traditional
  7. 68 16 The law of accelerating returns is physical basis of the The law of accelerating returns is the physical basis of the
  8. 75 21 then the entire scenario looks very different from tradition then the entire scenario looks very different from traditional
  9. 80 28 was in many more informed, not by the theory of natural was in many ways more informed, not by the theory of natural
  10. 82 28 other technologies, tends to manipulates nature to adapt to other technologies, tends to manipulate nature to adapt to
  11. 86 2 transcendence led the idea of altering the physical laws of transcendence led to the idea of altering the physical laws of
  12. 86 26 modification is a kind of strange loop goes outside the modification is a kind of strange loop that goes outside the
  13. 91 13 kings faced the challenge of God inspired prophets. Ahab kings faced the challenge of God-inspired prophets. Ahab
  14. 95 12 championing the cause those most vulnerable to extinction, championing the cause of those most vulnerable to extinction,
  15. 103 14 Darwin’s theory of evolution such if they benefit organisms Darwin’s theory of evolution if they benefit organisms
  16. 103 19 genes passes on to the next generation, genes for altruistic genes passed on to the next generation, genes for altruistic
  17. 104 32 actively opted for the life of persecutation that followed actively opted for the life of persecution that followed
  18. 114 9 former slaves-technologies as ends was a means of Moses as a former slaves-technologies as ends was a means of Moses as an
  19. 115 12 only environment factors will be less effective than one that only environmental factors will be less effective than one that
  20. 115 22 interchangeable because Judaism is built around observe interchangeable because Judaism is built around observed
  21. 117 14 consequences of monotheistic values that ascribe unique and consequence of monotheistic values that ascribe unique and
  22. 119 3 which the next step could work from. This foundation was which the next step could work. This foundation was
  23. 134 5 religion support Egyptian social hierarchy. religion supported Egyptian social hierarchy.
  24. 137 14 idea of revolution, strongly influence by Bible because, was idea of revolution was strongly influence by Bible because it was
  25. 143 23 towards the ends of goodness. Darkness is to directed and towards the ends of goodness. Darkness is directed and
  26. 145 25 (biologically ground) laws, one is literally overriding one’s (biologically grounded) laws, one is literally overriding one’s
  27. 146 32 looked upon the bases of a political-sociobiological looked upon as the bases of a political-sociobiological
  28. 147 25 biology nature and the transcendence of physical nature is biological nature and the transcendence of physical nature is
  29. 148 29 in the form of its source code, it ability to quickly and in the form of its source code, its ability to quickly and
  30. 164 18 have overwhelming been victims of the most politically have overwhelmingly been victims of the most politically
  31. 165 12 With Zionism Jews are victims once again, only this time With Zionism, Jews are victims once again, only this time
  32. 168 15 the ultimate victory their moral mission against oppression the ultimate victory of their moral mission against oppression
  33. 172 26 is there an ultimate destination that equality “progresses”? If is there an ultimate destination to which equality “progresses”? If
  34. 176 25 seems to leads to the progressive inability to define the seems to lead to the progressive inability to define the
  35. 182 23 uses to distinguishes plant life from animal life — its lesser distinguishes plant life from animal life — its lesser
  36. 183 2 unequal evolutionary foundation upon which its stands on. unequal evolutionary foundation upon which its stands.
  37. 183 12 Revolutionary could do so because their ancestors trampled Revolution could do so because their ancestors trampled
  38. 184 22 The life of a single cell can exist because it out of The life of a single cell can exist because it is out of
  39. 185 12 progress has only been made when some fought to extended progress has only been made when some fought to extend
  40. 187 7 construct that social group holism; the Western “individual” construct than social group holism; the Western “individual”
  41. 199 9 sociobiological hierarchies and economizes them. The sociobiological hierarchies and economize them. The
  42. 201 27 Karl Marx was understandably obsessed this central Karl Marx was understandably obsessed with this central
  43. 203 22 gene are analyzed and transferred into information as genes are analyzed and transferred into information as
  44. 210 7 Auschwitz forces a reevaluate of which is more Auschwitz forces a reevaluation of which is more
  45. 212 16 dominion, but a secure existence; a territorial limited dominion, but a secure existence; a territorially limited
  46. 215 22 However, if one recognizes the larger evolution perspective However, if one recognizes the larger evolutionary perspective
  47. 219 31 came naturally to Jews, there would be need to code it into a came naturally to Jews, there would be no need to code it into a
  48. 221 30 external to Jews, just the Mosaic laws themselves are external to Jews just as the Mosaic laws themselves are
  49. 228 16 rule of a well-constructed God-AI over the relatively rule of a well-constructed God-AI over the relative
  50. 229 2 alternative to the overwhelming more common method of alternative to the overwhelmingly more common method of
  51. 230 12 law that outsmart biology, taken to its extreme, lead to the law that outsmarts biology, taken to its extreme, lead to the
  52. 230 18 progression: just the non-biological intelligence of Mosaic progression: just as the non-biological intelligence of Mosaic
  53. 231 21 Singularity, that his bestows any kind of privileged position Singularity, that this bestows any kind of privileged position
  54. 238 25 understanding a phenomenon such as Nazism on the basis understand a phenomenon such as Nazism on the basis
  55. 241 29 complacent, thoughtless, unquestioning acceptance of the complacent, thoughtless, unquestioning acceptance of
  56. 247 17 positions or values can be help but be self-contradictory in a positions or values can't be help but be self-contradictory in a
  57. 248 8 to determine what is true. Strauss’s attempted to vindicate to determine what is true. Strauss attempted to vindicate
  58. 252 13 to nonhistoricist claim to truth. In this way, many to nonhistoricist claims to truth. In this way, many
  59. 253 24 Jerusalem. It would thus appear that the seeming Jerusalem. It would thus appear that the seemingly
  60. 257 14 existence of God cannot be refuted unless one understand existence of God cannot be refuted unless one understands
  61. 279 31 and justification for our overthrown through the enlightened and justification for our overthrow through the enlightened
  62. 281 1 some level of truth to this. Strictly speaking, however, the is some level of truth to this. Strictly speaking, however, the
  63. 282 18 Technological that overpowers biological humanity is, Technology that overpowers biological humanity is,
  64. 283 27 There is a paradoxical at the ethical heart of the modern There is a paradox at the ethical heart of the modern
  65. 286 15 progress (to get to one degree to a higher degree requires progress (to get from one degree to a higher degree requires
  66. 288 14 of connecting anything to anything that led to counter-power of connecting anything to anything that led to the counter-power
  67. 289 26 on the web. Crucially, the semantic web is significant step on the web. Crucially, the semantic web is a significant step
  68. 298 26 that there exists one thousand AIs, each of which is a trillion that there exists one hundred AIs, each of which is a trillion
  69. 300 6 miniscule difference in time could decide the decisive miniscule difference in time could determine the decisive
  70. 304 2 infanticide, euthanasia, genocide, and others policies” infanticide, euthanasia, genocide, and other policies”
  71. 308 20 evolutionary rooted in a revolution against total evolutionarily rooted in a revolution against total
  72. 309 26 human morality is precisely what leads to conclusion that human morality is precisely what leads to the conclusion that
  73. 311 7 human behavior, as opposed humans controlling their human behavior, as opposed to humans controlling their
  74. 317 2 the most the perfect question: the most perfect question:
  75. 319 2 unlocks a realistic, evolutionary understanding of unlock a realistic, evolutionary understanding of
  76. 321 22 Judaism and Christianity are orientated towards visions of Judaism and Christianity are oriented towards visions of
  77. 322 21 claims becomes absurd if Jews are pointing to the path to a claims become absurd if Jews are pointing to the path to a
  78. 323 4 decisively informs that character of the Singularity. decisively informs the character of the Singularity.
  79. 323 14 while postbiological evolution, the overcoming the rule of while postbiological evolution, the overcoming of the rule of
  80. 323 15 genes, tends to go goes hand in hand with greater genes, tends to go hand in hand with greater
  81. 324 5 this man Jesus demands total loyalty and no dissent? Sieg this man Jesus demand total loyalty and no dissent? Sieg
  82. 325 24 with rejecting himself as the product of the rape of Roman without rejecting himself as the product of the rape of Roman
  83. 329 26 because all have fundamentally misunderstandings of what because all have fundamental misunderstandings of what
  84. 336 16 existence would not have the meaning over two thousand existence would not have the same meaning over two thousand
  85. 336 21 did was possible for him in his own time, and spoke for his did what was possible for him in his own time, and spoke for his
  86. 340 24 humanity’s greatest beneficiary. God is most rational humanity’s greatest beneficiary. God is the most rational
  87. 341 31 namely, “Who should own capital?”” While keeping in namely, 'Who should own capital?'" While keeping in
  88. 342 1 who owns the machines; who own technology. It is because who owns the machines; who owns technology. It is because
  89. 344 26 link that we share our ancestors who were bacteria, fish, and link that we share with our ancestors who were bacteria, fish, and
  90. 347 25 possibility of superhuman AI is guilt of deicide. The Terrans possibility of superhuman AI is guilty of deicide. The Terrans
  91. 351 6 De Garis’s experience almost certainly goes to original roots De Garis’s experience almost certainly goes to the original roots
  92. 355 32 is false as a relfection of the actual units, structures, and is false as a reflection of the actual units, structures, and
  93. 364 23 like stereotypical gentiles. Did some Jews make Jesus the like stereotypical gentiles? Did some Jews make Jesus the
  94. 365 22 conditions, self-deception can be evolutionary adaptive conditions, self-deception can be evolutionarily adaptive
  95. 376 4 undo the sin of rape, Jesus had to completely relinquishment undo the sin of rape, Jesus had to completely relinquish
  96. 384 11 in Judaism. Born about 40 years after Jesus, Rabbi Akiva in Judaism. Born about 40 years after Jesus, Rabbi Akiba
  97. 385 26 gospels records crowds of Jews who implicitly took a more gospels record crowds of Jews who implicitly took a more
  98. 387 29 biological borders, memeic insemination requires biological borders, memetic insemination requires
  99. 399 1 Romans at this time is that no expected Romans to treat non- Romans at this time is that no one expected Romans to treat non-
  100. 401 6 Imagine that Jesus persistently attempted to be prove his Imagine that Jesus persistently attempted to prove his
  101. 405 19 For Jews or Romans to live as politically entities in a For Jews or Romans to live as political entities in a
  102. 413 17 this be the son of David?" There would no need to argue this be the son of David?" There would be no need to argue
  103. 415 4 overcome the condition of being "house divided", and overcome the condition of being a "house divided", and
  104. 418 16 This means, not that Jesus had any clear prejudice against This does not mean that Jesus had any clear prejudice against
  105. 418 20 generalizations born of the situation he found himself. That generalizations born of the situation in which he found himself. That
  106. 419 7 something new that could not be fit into the old wineskins of something new that could not fit into the old wineskins of
  107. 424 2 consciousness is significant here, for Christianity conscience consciousness is significant here, for Christian conscience
  108. 425 5 perpetuated, and expand its own selfishness as a purely perpetuate, and expand its own selfishness as a purely
  109. 426 19 here, and in this conflict, Jesus is unmistakable on the side of here, and in this conflict, Jesus is unmistakably on the side of
  110. 432 24 might made right. Impotent against Christianity contagion might made right. Impotent against the Christianity contagion
  111. 435 15 Gathering Jewish crowd around himself in protection from Gathering a Jewish crowd around himself in protection from
  112. 435 17 necessity that insulate him from his enemies. When Jesus necessity that insulated him from his enemies. When Jesus
  113. 436 25 synthesis of Rome and Israel. The temple high priests, synthesis of Rome and Israel? The temple high priests,
  114. 438 1 Caesar, identity as the “son of God” was inescapably an Caesar, his identity as the “son of God” was inescapably an
  115. 439 2 inevitable focuses on Jews precisely because Jewish moral inevitably focuses on Jews precisely because Jewish moral
  116. 441 8 warfare that deeming the preservation of all sociobiological warfare that deemed the preservation of all sociobiological
  117. 444 1 turning the other cheek, it would seem that Jesus exemplified turning the cheek, it would seem that Jesus exemplified
  118. 447 7 probably more shame and pride than most. Belief in the Jesus probably more shame and pride than most. Belief in Jesus
  119. 448 27 What could be more ridiculous that the idea that Jesus’s What could be more ridiculous than the idea that Jesus’s
  120. 450 13 unsubverting the subversion of Jesus’s message subverted reversing the subversion of Jesus’s message subverted
  121. 461 24 Christians would not do their duty. Christianity proved a Christians would not do their duty. Christianity proved
  122. 468 22 patriarchal state and helped evolved modern Western patriarchal state and helped evolve modern Western
  123. 472 17 pure spirituality will not cease to exist only a physical,
  124. 472 21 one can Christianity did not succeed in decisively one can see that Christianity did not succeed in decisively
  125. 474 3 If the technological evolution proceeds to the point where If technological evolution proceeds to the point where
  126. 474 4 human labor is no longer necessary, and humans finds human labor is no longer necessary, and humans find
  127. 478 8 Individualism, in turns, acts as the monkeywrench in the Individualism, in turn, acts as the monkeywrench in the
  128. 480 8 His anti-bodily identity negated the reach his hereditary His anti-bodily identity negated the reach of his hereditary
  129. 482 13 extreme, altruism negates kin selective relationship to genes. extreme, altruism negates its kin selective relationship to genes.
  130. 488 16 Klu Klux Klan. Caught between white supremacism and Ku Klux Klan. Caught between white supremacism and
  131. 488 17 Christ supremacism, the Klu Klux Klan has solved the Christ supremacism, the Ku Klux Klan has solved the
  132. 493 20 altruism of the normal family was saving grace for most, for altruism of the normal family was a saving grace for most, for
  133. 494 17 Romans were considered political opposite — and often Romans were considered political opposites — and often
  134. 497 33 not be surprising if meme mutation playing an important not be surprising if meme mutation played an important
  135. 500 1 natural selection has cultivated the assumption that there is natural selection has cultivated the assumption that it is
  136. 509 13 "Doesn't this say everything?" If the German were to be "Doesn't this say everything?" If the Germans were to be
  137. 511 12 existence of the race enemy. War represents the most physical existence of the enemy race. War represents the most physical
  138. 512 6 they were not. By alienating Jews as the embodiment of they were not. By identifying Jews as the embodiment of
  139. 514 9 The Nazi themselves, however, identified Jews as The Nazis themselves, however, identified Jews as
  140. 515 25 idealistic, mechanisms that made them efficient gene idealistic mechanisms that made them efficient gene
  141. 516 20 political power. Political power was literally not apart of the political power. Political power was literally not a part of the
  142. 520 27 profoundly influence by the Judeo-Christian valuation of profoundly influenced by the Judeo-Christian valuation of
  143. 522 11 enslavement peoples such as the Egyptians. The post- enslavement by peoples such as the Egyptians. The post-
  144. 527 6 uninclined to form the political conditions of total, eugenic, disinclined to form the political conditions of total, eugenic,
  145. 534 25 law could called a geme complex; a symbiotic law could be called a geme complex, a symbiotic
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