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- Ok, ill keep you review short since there is not a lot to fix:)
- Hello CranBerryMC, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot....
- Structure:
- This is anything from towers to houses to barns. You house is great for the initiate rank! continue the good work
- Organics:
- This is anything living, like animals and trees. Your trees are also great for the initiate rank. I saw your theme was fall, so if you want, you can add fall coloured leaves to your trees. You could add orange or do the regular leaves and change your plot biome to desert (/plot set biome *biome*). This is just a suggestion, but it is not necessary for you to rank up. Great job here!
- Terrain:
- This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. the materials used are great, but they are a bit crazy. maybe using them less random and maybe making a path to break up the pattern a bit. also, most of the ground itself it flat. try adding more hills and craters all around your plot to fix this problem.
- Other than that, great job!:)
- Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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