xVTMxMinisterOfWar: Challenge for clarity: T1 standards RM Ruleset. Environmental context will be of the visual cues of a standard arena. The ground will be sand, and the environment is warm sunny day ( 15c) with a stone coliseum which is the size of a football field. No innate environmental controls No NPC. Earth physics and rationally explained biology based on known sciences. (I.e. an atom performs the same as it would in our current scientific literature and overall principles of matter.) Due to the nature of fictional characters, if things are explained with known units of measure upfront there will be no issue. No NPC controls.  No max post size with No word minimum in a post, 2 Void Max then automatic loss.  (I.E No God Modding, Auto-Hitting, and Metagaming.) can be forgiven. Grammar and spelling forgiven. Each person may enlist one judge to represent them in a dispute. Judges will be agreed upon upfront. A 3rd party judge may be recruited if a judge is deemed to be illogical or unethical. Bios will be presented upfront in the initial post (I.e Chars backstory and breed etc). Initial post will be by SlayerofDoom  as the challenger Both parties will confirm being ready before submitting bios/ arena entry posts.  1 hour time limits suggested time lengths in between posting, 24 hour maximum with justifiable reasons. Players must abide by real earth physics, not comic book jargon (I.E spirit realms and jumping over the moon without explanation on how the character does this.) Both players will keep weapons to a melee fashion. I.E no ranged weapons like guns. However swords and knives etc can be thrown within reason. Both players can use medieval to modern weapons. If this challenge is countered, please provide this entire paragraph with suggested edits to terms. Small vague OOC injections of terms will be considered void from this proposal going forward. As a courtesy, this can be down by copy and pasting this into a word document and injecting the edited proposal.








xVTMxMinisterOfWar: /me (P) This afternoon felt sunny and warm as he approached his destination. A dark shadow cast across the ground would taunt the shady fellow. As if to call his name, as if it knew his whole life story. But little did his shadow know that Valyrian Machiavelli started out life in the slums. His parents were tough strong-willed characters, early on in life Valyrian learned street smarts and survival with minimal means. His father, who was a true believer in inner strength over adversity wanted Valyrian to be trained in martial arts early on. He spent almost all his money to place Valyrian in martial arts. At the young age of 4, his father knew that he would retain his early life training to the extent of the habitual. He wanted his son to be as fluid with martial arts as any normal child would be with walking or running. The first martial art Valyrian was placed in was Brazilian jiu-jitsu. By the age of 20 was already a 7th-degree black belt. He took to the sport quite well and was even shipped to Brazil for formal training and competitions due to his accelerated accomplishments in the discipline.

[On his free time, he would even to this day train underprivileged children for no charge at a community center. He would teach them the same mastery he held. He was a master of ground combat, and kinetic chess able to submit most opponents in moments.(C)] < Inconsistency No.1

xVTMxMinisterOfWar: (P) By the age of 21 Valyrian joined the army and entering Princess Patricia's Canadian Light Infantry. Where after a few peacekeeping missions were recruited and hand-selected for the Joint Task Force 2. These were Canada's special forces who were called in for various tasks like counter-terrorism and high-profile hostage situations. He received much training during these years, but none of which was as much as he learned on tour in Israel where he learned Krav Maga. Which was a mix of skills he was already a master in, but now learned how to blend his skills with

[striking and techniques to control others, attacks with melee weapons earning a rank of E1]  < Extremely Vague. Possible Power Playing

 in over a year by challenging his instructors. Something wasn’t all right with Valyrian. He has a bloodlust, that couldn’t be cured. Although his missions were for a good cause, he took a sadistic pleasure in blood and death. He took a mentorship with a behavioral psychologist, to whom in which he is in communication with to this day. He would often read advised materials suggested and debated many psychological theories.

[In the process began to ask for precise help and would practice cold reading.] < No explanation as to how this pertains to the character or enhances passive abilities.


 All of this never cured his odd tendencies, he would often still take the time to carve up some dead bodies and leave them hanging in town squares to scare the locals into not joining terrorist cells.(C)
xVTMxMinisterOfWar: /me During one mission in Iraq Valyrian had strong bonds with his six-man team. The group of them stumbled upon a large stash of gold, which once belonged to a prince they executed. During a mission blackout, the had paid off some locals to move the gold and figured out a way to move it out of the country. After this mission, at the age of 24 Valyrian was now worth over 70 million. Darkness grew inside of him with his new-found wealth. He hated returning home and seeing the struggles that plagued the streets in which he grew up. He had many internal conflicts which arose in him. He wished for escape and was bloodthirsty for more battle. The riches he had earned from theft corrupted him, and he wished to channel his new darkness and take his killing skills to a new level.  He eventually moved to Japan where he moved to the Iga Province. This was one of the birthplaces of the “Ninjutsu” or known as Shinobi-jutsu. With his vast wealth, he bought a massive mansion with multiple training rooms. (C) < Entirely useless. Doesn't describe a single  character trait.


xVTMxMinisterOfWar: He spent over 20 million on the home, and almost 10 million on the personal grand master instruction in each of the ninjutsu disciplines.

[Taijutsu unarmed combat,] What does Taijutsu entail? Extremely vague.

using one's body as the only weapon, Kenjutsu  know as sword fighting, Bōjutsu Know as stick and staff fighting, Shurikenjutsu  know as the art of throwing blades, Sōjutsu known as spear fighting, Kusarigamajutsu  the mastery of chain and sickle weapon, Kayakujutsu  the study of pyrotechnics and explosives, Hensōjutsu  or know as disguise & impersonation, Shinobi-iri  or know as stealth and entering methods, Bajutsu or horsemanship, Sui-ren or water training, Bōryaku or military strategy, Choho or espionage studies, Intonjutsu  or known as escaping and concealment studies, Tenmon or meteorology studies, Chi-mon geography studies, Seishin-Teki-Kyo‘yo‘ Or  know as Spiritual studies. Each of these disciplines required a master to teach. For majority of the hours in a day, they would each have a turn to train Valyrian on a strict regimen.


[Becoming a 10th Dan himself in six years putting well over 20,000 hours] Inconsistency No.2 A training regimen that requires 9 hours a day across the span of six years. Training for nine hours consecutively for even the most athletic human being imaginable will result in the degradation of physical health and muscle. Cartilage, sinew and muscle fibers will be fickle and the person will be extremely lacking in stamina due to poor sleeping and rest habits. ''Earth physics and rationally explained biology based on known sciences.'' - xVTMxMinisterOfWar

 in the disciplines. His instructors used to say Valyrian had the most Bujin
( Bujin is a noun, not an adjective. Correction: ''He is the most Bujin.'' https://www.thefreedictionary.com/Bujin  )

 [they had ever seen. With the ability to subtly sense attacks, it was almost like the spirits guided his senses. However, this was due to the years of practiced meditation and learning to deeply depend on his intuition.] < Extremely vague.  You do not rely on intuition or meditation to read an opponent or sense their attacks.


One of Valyrian favorite instructors was one who taught him the art of war using Sun Tzu's teachings. (c)


JechtBlackMoor: Back.
xVTMxMinisterOfWar: /me By the age of 30, Valyrian was now a drug lord investing his money in the corrupt classes in Japan and employed many thugs. He would practice campaigns of bloodshed using the tactics he had learned. Making them go into turf wars gangland style and applying Sun Tzu's laws to each battle. Valyrian was a history buff and would read countless books regarding the leaders of the past. His vast wealth and military connections also allowed him to get his hands on the most relevant armaments and technology. As his empire grew, he decided to move back to his homeland of Canada, where he built a facility for training and an operations center to run his gangs in Japan. Sometimes he would do odd training with midgets, taking on 10 at a time, to practice handling tiny opponents, and learning to bridge the gap of his height and speed in his new training grounds.  Today he would now spend his days coaxing the worlds best fighters to test his skills in death matches. (c)
Guest_SlayerofDoom: ( And how did you manage to type all this in the span of an hour? )
xVTMxMinisterOfWar: He has been said to have killed over 10,000 men in hand to hand combat, and now was bored wanting to the claim the title of champion of all fighters on the planet.  Valyrian was now 33 years old and in peak fighting shape. He stood 6’5 and weighed 235 pounds with a reach of 83 inches.


[He could dead lift 2,000 pounds with his dense well-trained muscles.] Unrealistic and virtually impossible for anyone under three hundred pounds. Reason: Muscle density not stated. While this answer may not be completely and totally scientific and accurate, I can try and break it down a little bit.

The average human, while weightlifting on a continuous basis, is usually pretty happy if he can bench 1.5x his body weight, squat double his bodyweight, and deadlift anywhere between 2.5–4x his body weight. So at, let’s say, 170 lbs, we can see this as follows: 255 bench, 340 squat, 550 deadlift. Ok, so taking that, we obviously see people that are extraordinarily strong and athletic. These people can weigh 170 lbs, but squat close to 500, deadlift close to 700, bench close to 350 etc. Example: Andre the Giant seven foot, 570lbs, trained but not lean muscle can lift up to 2000 lbs. Mathematically, dead lift is 4x the body's weight. This equation would be 2.5 or 4 x 235 (2.5 x 235= 587 minimum and 4 x 235 = 940 being the maximum.)





His punch held a record that would register at 96 horsepower, basically, his punch would be like getting hit with a sledgehammer or being hit by a small car. He had rapid eye reaction times to lock onto his targets with 120-millisecond speeds. And he could punch at 43 MPH and could make quick foot work and run at about 30 mph in a short sprint. He carried with him attached to a clip on his belt 15 Shuriken with razor sharpness. On each side of him, he had a sack containing 15 caltrops which each sharp edge being 1.5 inches long. On his back rested two 1095 carbon steel swords. One being a 2.5-foot-long Katana, and a second a 1.5-foot- long Katana being extremely sharp at 3 nanometres wide at the edge, which made them 10 times sharper than a razor blade which was cut with very precise lasers. On his right hip, he carried a third katana holstered to his belt ranging 2 feet long. The blades were lightweight and easy to carry in his military grade boots lined with 0.5 inches breathable Kevlar to prevent punctures The boots legs held two boot knives that were 6 inches long, with 1.5 nanometers sharpness, and a sharp point at the end for smooth stabbing punctures. (c)
xVTMxMinisterOfWar: He wore a slash resistant under armor beneath his clothes that fully covered his arms and legs. The appearance was that of a thin undershirt, that also covered his neck resting just above his Adam's apple. Being 0.5 inch thick, the material was made with 100% Cut-Tex pro with a blade resistance of EN 388:2003 Level 5, ISO 13997:1999 Level 5 and ASTM F 1790-05 Level 4 with an abrasion resistance of EN 388:2003 Level 4. He liked to look urban, so he wore dark black jeans and a hoodie which of course were lined with the 2 cm of the same material as his under armor. He liked to stay flexible and comfortable, but all his clothes had a 1mm thick layer of yellow polyethylene 100 u, to protect him from splashes of acid attacks. The belt he carried was a custom utility, aside from his two pouches and attached ninja stars,


 [he had two smoke grenades. 350 grams of hexachloroethane-zinc and granular aluminum mixed with vaporized amanita phalloides for a poison effect. The fungus was refined and added to a vapor to release with smoke, and has been known to be 10 times stronger than cyanide.]  ''Both players will keep weapons to a melee fashion. However swords and knives etc can be thrown within reason. '' - xVTMxMinisterOfWar.  The rules do not cover grenades, grenades are not melee weapons. This post is invalid due to validating the rules set by Minister. Weapons will be kept to melee fashion; grenades are explosive devices, used as a distraction or to harm with radius. Devices that explode or release gaseous contents are not melee in any logical, sensible or definable aspect; it is biological - biochemical warfare. They are considered ranged weapons because they have an expanding radius of affect that either release shrapnel or contents in a designated arena. No where will you find that grenades are stated to be melee weapons. Anything that inflicts damage or causes death is considered a weapon in manner of defense or offense.


In his hoody pockets, he had a hidden pocket which held a handful of crushed lead fillings, that he could throw at people as a blinding distraction because they were now in powder form. He wore an Avon M50 CBRN Gas Mask, enhanced with 0.5 -inch lightweight titanium and a Kevlar 3mm lining, to also allow him cutting resistance. For effect he installed led lighting to intimidate his foes like the samurai did with their painted masks. The mask had lots of filtered breathing point, so a cool breeze could enter while he moved to prevent sweating. (c)
Codryxnia: [To be fair, I write 20 pages in an hour if I focus, so this in an hour is kind of excusable.]
Guest_SlayerofDoom: ( Fair enough. )

xVTMxMinisterOfWar: [/me His hands wore knuckle-based weapons made of Lonsdaleite which is 58% harder than diamond, which were fashioned into a 2-inch claw shape with a 1 nanometer blades made of titanium that ran across the front edge.] < Scientifically invalid comic book fantasy. The rarity of meteorites crashing into the Earth without burning in the atmosphere containing Lonsdaleite is extremely rare. The designated character that xVTMxMinisterOfWar is playing is not stated to be a collector of Lonsdaleite or extraterrestrial anomalies that would possess the minuscule amount of this mineral. Having enough Lonsdaleite to make brass knuckle esque weapons would be false as it was not validated in the entrance scientifically or reasonably and is therefor comic book jargon. Earth physics and rationally explained biology based on known sciences. (I.e. an atom performs the same as it would in our current scientific literature and overall principles of matter.) Due to the nature of fictional characters, if things are explained with known units of measure upfront there will be no issue


[He has the blades decorated in crushed diamonds for a bling effect.] < Does not make sense. In order for the carbon atoms of diamonds to be solidly implemented in the steel it would have been when the steel was hot. Carbon steel would absorb the atoms from the diamond and burn them (due to the loss of carbon atoms) (I.e. an atom performs the same as it would in our current scientific literature and overall principles of matter.) Due to the nature of fictional characters, if things are explained with known units of measure upfront there will be no issue



These covered his 2mm tightly woven Kevlar tactical gloves he wore. They were extra dense for mobility of use, with Micropore nitrile style tips and palms to give a human skin like grip. Everything equipped to his person weighed 20lbs, which he had trained for years to fight in; he was completely comfortable fighting in his outfit as if he was naked. Due to his time in the armour and rigorous training, he had trained himself to carry weight even in a desert and regulate his exhaustion. Aside from his appearance, it was his own cold presence today that even gave him a chill even in the warm desert arena. The shivers of the excitement of battle would course through his skin. As his approach would draw to conclusion, he would look at the man standing before him in the desert arena and smirk. Both of his feet planted firmly on the ground, his hand resting on his holstered side katana. After a few small steps standing 15 feet away from the man, he would turn his back to him, and look up at the sun in a deep focus. He was now ready for battle. (c)



[xVTMxMinisterOfWar: /me While the crowd got anxious, he would drown out all noise and think about all the snickers he would consume after killing this bitch made nigga. (E)] < Invalid due to NPC usage.
( The rest of the post is voided due to comic book theatrics. Further reasons for void can be stated if necessary. )