Tayter_Kat

AquaticBubbles

Jun 25th, 2015
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  1. Hello AquaticBubbles, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. Structures are anything from houses to towers, to barns. Your structure is very flat, or lacking dept. Depth is layers on a buildings/walls. You can add depth by adding trap doors, buttons, stairs, slabs, fences, etc. to you build.
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  6. Organics:
  7. Organics are anything living like trees or flowers. Your tree is fine, but the leaves are very minimal to the trunk. Add more leaves to your tree to make it more realistic. Also, you can add more Organics like bushes and other things, because it is lacking there too.
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  9. Terrain:
  10. The terrain is the ground itself. Your terrain is very flat. Try adding more craters or hills to your plot to make it more realistic. You also have some green stained clay in the front, but not back of the plot. IF you fix the ground , it might be more appealing.
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  12. Other:
  13. You have some empty space in your plot, try adding more organics or another structure to fill in the space.
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  15. Good Luck! <3
  16. -Tayter_Kat
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