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  1. Hotori MGS (Main problem is that there's a few missing lines before the hero quotes)
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  3. Hotori: (.........Here it is!)
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  5. "Everyone has their weaknesses...@And there's nothing wrong with that...@But if you don't try to overcome your weaknesses...@Then you're not fit to be a hero!"
  6. --> There's a line missing in between these two
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  8. Hotori: (Calm down... It's also in the Strategy Guide...)
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  10. "Always keep your cool.@That's what a man is supposed to do."
  11. --> line missing in between these two
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  15. Hotori: There should be a page here in the@Strategy Guide...
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  17. "Don't give up!@Persevere and push onward just one more step!@Sometimes that single step is all it takes to overcome a barrier...!"
  18. --> line missing in between these two
  19. --> add a line break after "overcome"
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  23. Hotori: (The perfect line to help me find my courage...@Here it is!)
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  25. "I will...turn even fear into power! I will control fear...!"
  26. --> line missing in between these two
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  28. Hotori: [wait:0.8][chara:304101:lipSynch_1]I-is someone behind us...?
  29. --> add ......... before the inline tags
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  33. Hotori: (I remember, when I saw Dragoon Red this#morning...)
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  35. "True strength is overcoming fear for the sake of@what you must protect!"
  36. --> replace the # with @
  37. --> line missing in between these two
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  41. Yukika: (...Well, regardless of whether or not that's the truth...)
  42. --> add a line break before "truth"
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  46. Rion MGS (Looks good for the most part! The main problem to fix is to add : before "Expressions", and I don't think the title is needed after the first line for each category)
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  49. Expressions of Love That Even Hotorin Can Understand@#3: Personal Appearance
  50. Expressions of Love That Even Hotorin Can Understand@#3: She's surprisingly fussy about her appearance.@I'm always the one who coordinates her outfits.
  51. Expressions of Love That Even Hotorin Can Understand@#3: But once in a while, I'll let her choose what I wear.@I'm sure that'll make her happy!
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  53. Expressions of Love That Even Hotorin Can Understand@#9: Sense of adventure
  54. Expressions of Love That Even Hotorin Can Understand@#9: Even though she's a scaredy-cat,@she likes adventure and exploration,@and seems to get excited when we take a different path.
  55. Expressions of Love That Even Hotorin Can Understand@#9: Showing consideration for those feelings is@one way of showing love!
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  57. Expressions of Love That Even Hotorin Can Understand@#16: Loneliness
  58. Expressions of Love That Even Hotorin Can Understand@#16: She gets lonely easily, so I have to be there for her all the time!@I'll hold her hand when she's anxious.
  59. --> and for the last line here, move the line break before "time"
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  63. Expressions of Love That Even Hotorin Can Understand@#1: Heroes
  64. Expressions of Love That Even Hotorin Can Understand@#1: Hotorin's favorite thing to talk about is heroes.@She'll definitely be happy if I bring up the topic.
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  66. Expressions of Love That Even Hotorin Can Understand@#36: Sneakers
  67. Expressions of Love That Even Hotorin Can Understand@#36: I know that she's always counting her allowance while@looking at the displays at shoe stores.
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