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- Hello The_CanadianBrit!!!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Let's start off with your structure.
- Some things that I've noticed about your structure is that your towers are lacking depth and detail. The only detail they have atm are some windows and a small variety of blocks. By adding depth, which is the layering of many blocks to add detail, you are making your towers look more lively and realistic. U should also add a bigger variation of blocks for example more mossy cobble, cobblestone, cracked stone brick, andesite, etc. Your walls have a decent design but it is a little repetitive. Try mixing the designs up a little. It doesnt look like much effort was put into it if almost everything is the same.
- Now lets talk about your organics; you have none. Organics is a vital part to the ranking of your plot. Some examples of organics are animals, statues(excluding player statues),flowers, and most commonly trees. Implement some of these organics into your plot and make sure you dont just have one. Try and elaborate and really think of how this would look good on your plot. Really important that you dont bonemeal your trees. They need to seem like effort was put into them.
- You also don't really have a terrain on your plot. As of now, its just flat default grass that has been bonemealed over. Try practicing on making small mountains or at least some small hills. This will really give your plot a more realistic and unique feel to it. When you're making your terrain, try not to stick with just grass blocks and bonemeal. Like your structure, add a variety of blocks to your terrain such as cobblestone, dirt, podzol, gravel, or any block that would match your palette. Terrain isn't limited on just mountains and such; you could even put a waterfall or a small pond. I would like you to work in this. :D
- I have decided that your plot needs a some more effort put into it b4 I can rank you. Just remember my advice and try to make it harmonize with your plot. Good Luck and im looking forward to your next submission! :DDD
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