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- Hello LavaPlayzMC!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today! Lets start off with your structure.
- Your structure is lacking detail, depth, and color. Try adding other blocks for color and slabs/stairs for detailing. Push in your walls as well for depth. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial
- Your trees are bonemealed which are shamed upon. Remove them and make custom trees. Dont forget to add branches/roots.
- Your terrain is plain and lifeless. Your river is perfectly symmetrical which is also weird. Try making it curve and sway. Change the bottom of the river to sand/sandstone for detail, and add flowers/sugar cane around it. Try to add green clay, green wool, cobblestone, gravel to your ground for color and variation. You might wanna put some more hills as well.
- Your plot shows minimal effort and I will have to deny your submission. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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