Griffinrider7's Spark Review!

Hey Griffinrider7!! I'm HeyItsElla, a JuniorMod on the Sunfury server!

So I don't see the need to go through the whole idea of terrain, organics and structure because you seem to have a good understanding of those, which is a great thing.

I see genuine potential in your plot, and I feel that with a little pointers and tips you could easily go far.

Structure- I like your structure! The palette (block choice) is very appropriate to the plot, and the level of detail is very good for a spark. I like it! However, would you be able to perhaps... Add a door and let us see inside the structure? It would really make the plot stand out and enable us mods to have more reason to uprank you!

Organics- You need some hints and pointers with your organics. The tree's need editing, big time. I'm glad you haven't just spawned in tree's because we do not want that. Try making the trunks a little thicker, and add quite a few more leaves. For a good tree idea, type in /plot visit pedronova He has some good tree examples on his spark plot.

Terrain- I like your terrain a fair bit so far! Just a few tiny little changes yeah? On the top of your hills coming out of the water, rather than having flat tops, would you be able to make them have at least two or three layers? Just make sure it's not flat? Apart from that the rest of the terrain is really good!