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  1. 00:00:284 (1,2,3,4,5) - id reccomend changing these jumps so that 5 has bigger spacing before the slider after, that way the map contrasts the loud addition of many intstruments
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  3. 00:01:763 (1) - random new combo remove it
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  5. 00:01:341 (1) - very eratic spacing. it shouldnt be this inconsistent when youre mapping such a consistent vocal line
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  7. 00:04:510 (7) - loud sound lands on slider end pls fix
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  9. 00:04:932 (8) - ^
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  11. 00:06:622 (1) - do u have a reason to justify these having so many new combos?
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  13. 00:14:756 (5) - remove the spacing here
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  15. 00:16:763 (1,2) - slider ends on white ticks are usually a no-no, especially on this song
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  17. 00:18:453 (1) - why the eratic increase in spacing?
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  19. 00:20:143 (3,4) - slider end on white ticks
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  21. 00:23:101 (2,3) - u could be cooler and blanket these like so: http://prntscr.com/k7ostg
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  23. 00:24:791 (3,4) - ^
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  25. 00:26:481 (3) - ^ (srsly just an idea tho)
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  27. 00:27:960 (2,3,4,5,6) - u can also make this look cooler like this: http://prntscr.com/k7otcg
  28. (you can do that like this: http://prntscr.com/k7otjw -> http://prntscr.com/k7otth, ctrl+s if you want the spacing a little bigger)
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  30. in general you should up the AR to around 8.5 or 8.8, and you should work on how your jump patterns look aesthetically
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