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- God damn, I want to write a scene calling back to episode 2, except the joke is that Homura tricks Mami into saying Dom things, like "You've been a bad girl Homura Akemi." and "Don't struggle, or you'll be punished more." Then just have it end with Madoka saying that this is too weird, and she's out. But not sure how to write Homura's dialogue, you got any ideas?
- Hm, let's see...
- It'd need a lot of leading, but for comedic purposes we could get really heavy with it and ignore that normally this would be too on the nose?
- Kyubox Incubox
- Something like...
- Mar 3
- Kyubox Incubox
- Mami: You really cause a lot of trouble, don't you Homura?
- Homura: You make it sound like I'm a bad girl, Tomoe.
- Mami: You certainly act like a bad girl, you're always-
- Homura: Sorry, I can't quite hear you. Could you say that again?
- Mami: I said you're a bad girl Homura, you're always so uncooperative and hostile to everyone.
- Homura: So I'm a bad girl?
- Mami: Yes, you're a bad girl Homura.
- Homura: Would you say that I've been... naughty?
- Mami: What?
- Homura: Am I a naughty girl?
- Mami: I-... I guess?
- Homura: You guess what?
- Mami: You're a naughty girl?
- Homura: You don't sound very confident Tomoe. How can you possibly accuse me like this if you're going to be so shy about it!
- Mami: Fine! You're a naughty girl Homura! You've been very bad!
- Homura: Fuck yeah, keep calling me a naug- ahem. So what if I'm a bad, naughty girl? What are you going to do about it?
- Mami: Eh? I uh, haven't thought about it this far.... But if you keep being naughty then I'll have to stop you.
- Homura: So you'll try to stop me?
- Mami: That's right.
- Homura: You'll punish me?
- Mami: I guess?
- Homura: You guess what?
- Mami: I'll punish you...?
- Homura: For what?
- Mami: Jeez! If you keep on being a bad, naughty girl then I'll have to punish you!
- Homura: FUCK YES.
- Homura: ....I mean
- Mami: ....
- Homura: You talk a big game Tomoe, but can you really stop me?
- Mami: Of course, I could tie you up with my ribbons if I wanted to
- Homura: So you're saying you could tie me up?
- Mami: That's right?
- Homura: But why?
- Mami: We've been through this already! You're a bad, naughty girl! And if you keep being naughty then I'll have to punish you by tying you up!
- Homura: [trembling at the knees, rubbing her thighs together while panting slightly]
- Mami: Oh? Are you scared Homura? Have you finally realised what will happen to you if you keep being naughty?
- Homura: N-Not yet! Tell me what you'll do to me after you tie me up!
- Mami: Hm, let's see... First I'll need to lecture you on how to be a proper magical girl.
- Homura: So you're going to explain exactly how naughty I am?
- Mami: That's right. If you keep being a bad girl I'll punish you by tying you up and tell you exactly why you're being so naughty. I'll teach you a lesson you'll never forget.
- Homura: PLEASE SIT ON MY FACE
- Mami: W-What?!
- Madoka: That's it, I'm out.
- Mami: Kaname? When did you get here?
- Madoka: I was here the whole time, and now I'm out
- Homura: M-Madoka, wait!
- Madoka: I'M OUT
- Mami: Please wait, Kama-
- Madoka: I'M OUUUUUUUUUUUUT
- Madoka: [walks out the door, continuously screaming how out she is as she leaves}
- Mami: ....
- Homura: .....
- Mami: What the hell is wrong with you, you freak?! Now Kaname probably thinks I'm weird now because of you!
- Homura: So uh, are you going to punish me now?
- Mami: Yes! Fine! Whatever! You were a bad girl so I'm going to punish you for being naughty, Homura!
- Mami: [ties Homura up with her ribbons and storms off]
- Homura: FUCK YES, THAT'S THE STU- wait, are you leaving? Don't leave me here!
- Mami: [already halfway across the room]
- Homura: C-Come on, you at least sit on me a little right?!
- Mami: [Doesn't even acknowledge Homura as she leaves]
- Homura: Mami? Madoka? Anyone?!
- Homura: ...
- Homura: ......
- Homura: ............
- Homura: God, being left alone like this is so fucking hot.
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- Beautiful, thank you!
- leafbladie
- Oh yeah, there was one other alternate end idea for this I had. That being Mami asking why she's like this. And Homura saying it's all because of her tying her up so many times in the past, that she grew a fetish for bindage out of stolkholm syndrome, and that Mami needs to take responsibility
- Someone smarter than me can probably write than but shorter though
- Kyubox Incubox
- And oh boy, that sounds about right
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- Thanks!
- Kyubox Incubox
- I'm just imagining Homura being unbelievably forward about it, to the point where its sexual harassment. Like Homura just grabbing Mami's hand and shoving it under her skirt and telling her to take responsibility
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- Oh my god, that's great
- Constantly harassing Mami with progressively more and more bold tactics
- Kyubox Incubox
- Like Mami opens up her shoe locker and there's a pair of Homura's panties in there with a note saying she has to take responsibility
- Mar 3
- Homura deliberately sitting down on Mami's leg and Mami breaks out into a cold sweat because the area Homura is sitting feels unusually warm and wet
- Homura constantly flashing her panties at Mami, except she took off her panties and put it in Mami's shoe locker already
- Mami goes to the bathroom and Homura is already in the stall, with a sign around her neck that says "use me"
- Kyubox Incubox
- Mami goes home and Homura is already sexily sprawled on her bed in a revealing babydoll
- Do you think the title of that story should be "Ultimate Sub Homura Akemi!"
- Kyubox Incubox
- Oh, the thing from before? Sure, that works out great
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- Homura: The thing is... I'm... You and me... We're not even from the same time! The truth is...I'm from the future. I've been tied up by you over and over and every time in every time I've had to be wrapped in those tight bonds. What choice did I have but to become a sub? What do I have to make you take responsibility? I kept doing this month over again searching for the answer.
- This was my idea for the idea of Homura saying it was Mami's fault and she had to take responsibility. Making it a parody of episode 11. Think that works? I might've made it too similar.
- I think making it similar to episode 11 is actually a good way to go, a parody of a serious speech helps highlight how ridiculous this is
- Kyubox Incubox
- I think that "in every time I've had to be wrapped in those tight bonds" might work better as "in every timeline" instead?
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- Nice choice
- leafbladie
- Of course, then that bega the question, would Mami acceot responsibility or not?
- Kyubox Incubox
- Probably not, since from her point of view its like Homura suddenly grew this fetish out of nowhere instead of it slowly being cultivated on the spot
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- True
- Kyubox Incubox
- But that's okay, that just means Homura needs to convince/force Mami into the role!
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- Power bottom Homura Akemi!
- You could also do a karmic destiny thing where Homura resets the timeline so often for her thirst that it starts affecting Mami
- Kyubox Incubox
- In another 100 timelines, Mami could become Supreme Ultimate Dominatrix
- Mar 3
- Oh god, that sounds beautiful.
- leafbladie
- She jabs her heel in Homura Akemi's crotch
- Starts with Mami tying Homura and running away because she's freaked out
- Ends with Mami tying Homura up and leaving because its advanced neglect play
- Kyubox Incubox
- Congrats Homura, nothing changed and you accomplished nothing
- Mar 3
- Oh god, that's horrible
- leafbladie
- Would Mami come back right before she dies of thirst and show her some advanced tehcniques?
- Kyubox Incubox
- Starts with Homura masturbating because Mami won't have anything to do with her and she needs to release all of this pent up lust. Ends with Homura masturbating while Mami watches because she was ordered to. In a way, nothing's changed but its an improvement right?
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- Can she masturbate while she's tied up, how would she do that? Dislocate her arm?
- Kyubox Incubox
- I guess it would depend on how she's tied up? For example, when Mami ties someone up she typically dangles them in mid-air as well right?
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- Yeah
- Well, if you did a shibari type bondange then wouldn't that put some body weight onto the rope that goes over your crotch?
- Kyubox Incubox
- Do your best to get yourself off Homura. Wriggle and squirm as much as you can, as the rope is enough to get you hot and bothered but not enough to actually make you cum
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- Oh, actually, that could lead to some great inermal monologue. Homura thinking she changed the rope style so she could get herself off in front of her.
- Kyubox Incubox
- Homura frantically trying to get herself off but she can't, and she's forced to beg Mami to finish her off
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- Mami uses her feet to do so because she doesn't want to dirty her hands
- Oh, that's a good one. I was thinking of Mami making Homura cum with her ass, now that she's all sensitive
- Kyubox Incubox
- Or Mami saying she'll only do it if Homura licks her out first, then makes Homura cum by yanking the rope around her crotch so it digs deeper into her pussy
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- One other idea, she gives Homura a magical dick, and says she has to suck her own dick if she wants to cum. The catch being that she has to do it in front of Madoka
- Homura, how flexible do you have to be to suck your own dick?
- Kyubox Incubox
- I do like the idea of being forced to do something lewd in front of Madoka though
- Mar 3
- I'd say Homura is pretty flexible. She weaved herself between Mami's bullets quite well
- leafbladie
- Also, she could just break her own spine if she needed to and heal it later.
- WOW, FUCKING HARDCORE
- Kyubox Incubox
- How about Mami gives herself a dick and she has to suck it in front of Madoka instead?
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- Yeah, that could work. I was just thinking we were going for the idea that Mami was interacting with Homura as little as possible for neglect play
- Or maybe Mami can film Homura sucking her dick on her phone, then send it to Homura and tell her to send it to Madoka. All Madoka sees is Homura giving someone a blowjob without seeing who is on the receiving end
- Kyubox Incubox
- Oh, if we're going for the neglect play angle then...
- Mar 3
- Kyubox Incubox
- Mami could leave a bunch of vibrators in Homura and then leave her all tied up. Maybe someone will even come across her too?
- Mar 3
- leafbladie
- Yeah, maybe Madoka wanting to help her by taking them out. But Homura says she can't.
- Kyubox Incubox
- Homura begging Madoka not to take them out because the pleasure would end, and Madoka doesn't know what to do
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