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- Hello Blumbo, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your Initiate plot...
- Structure:
- This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have some structures but it is missing some depth needed to rank up. Depth is the layers within a structure/building. You can add depth to a structure by adding trap doors, buttons, stairs, slabs, and fences. If you need a visual example of depth, visit /warp depthtutorial. DO not copy the tutorial, be creative and make it unique to you!
- Organics:
- This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have a tree, and it is good enough for you to rank up. So great job here!
- Terrain:
- This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. You have terrain, but it is very messy. It looks aot like a stair case, which is unnatural for terrain. I recommend fixing ti so it flows better all around.
- Good Luck<3
- Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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