Tayter_Kat

Blumbo

Aug 16th, 2015
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  1. Hello Blumbo, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your Initiate plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have some structures but it is missing some depth needed to rank up. Depth is the layers within a structure/building. You can add depth to a structure by adding trap doors, buttons, stairs, slabs, and fences. If you need a visual example of depth, visit /warp depthtutorial. DO not copy the tutorial, be creative and make it unique to you!
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have a tree, and it is good enough for you to rank up. So great job here!
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. You have terrain, but it is very messy. It looks aot like a stair case, which is unnatural for terrain. I recommend fixing ti so it flows better all around.
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  10. Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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