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- Hello Joshaxcool!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structures.
- They're a little weird based on color since you just mixed up the different wood blocks. Also they're lacking depth. ./warp depthtutorial for extra info. Your wall lacks color and has a repetitive design. Try to switch it up.
- You have no organics on your plot which is necessary for u to rank up. Organics are things such as trees, flowers, animals, etc.
- Your terrain is pretty flat and plain. You basically added a small hill on teh corner and bonemealed the ground. Try to add things such as mountains, hills, ponds, etc. Also add more blocks for variation such as green clay, green wool, cobblestone, gravel etc.
- I think your plot needs to have a little more effort and work before I rank you up. Good Luck and i hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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