xDraghun

xxGDOGGYxx Plot Review

Jul 30th, 2015
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  1. Hello xxGDOGGYxx!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
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  5. Your structure is really unique based off of its shape but it seems like it's lacking some color and some detail. Try to add more detail to it and maybe another kind of block to make it "pop". I also highly advise that you dont use beacons as a light source especially the ones hanging like that. It just makes your structure look weird and unappealing. Also, try adding detail to ur bridges.
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  7. Your trees are nice especially since they are custom made, but the branches are a little weird and short. Your trees are also lacking roots on the bottom.
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  9. Your terrain is pretty flat and needs some extra color and variation. Try adding other blocks such as green clay/cobblestone/etc for the ground and maybe sand/sandstone for the bottom of the river. Also, try adding hills/mountains which will greatly increase the look of your terrain. You could also add sugar cane/flowers around your river for a more realistic and detailed effect.
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  11. So far, I think your plot still needs more effort before I can rank you up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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