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- Hello PraecanoVenen!
- My name is xDraghun and today I will be reviewing your plot. Lets start off with your structure.
- Your structure has some nice depth, but it lacks detail. Add some detail by using slabs/stairs that match your block palette. I would also like for you to add another structure based off of all the extra space you have on your plot
- Your trees are custom made +1 and are really nice. I look how you added the branches and roots which most people forget.
- Your terrain needs a lot of work. Rn, it looks like a box. It doesnt look natural. Try to add more blocks and smooth it down so it doesn't look so fake. Add some other blocks to it to for variation and color such as green clay, dirt, cobblestone, etc.
- I think your plot still needs some work done to it before you can rank up. good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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