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- Hello SerpNexGames, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot...
- Building:
- The structure is anything from houses to castles to market stall. I see your house on the side of the plot, and it is lacking some depth. Depth is the layers a building material can make a wall/structure can give. You can add more depth by adding trap doors, stairs, slabs, buttons, fences, etc. Also, the area around your plot seems very empty, you can fill it with more structures like a bridge or outdoor oven.
- Terrain:
- Terrain is the ground itself, but it also includes caves, mountains, or even caves. Your terrain is fine, but there could be more hills and crevasses. Also, you can switch the building block as well, instead of just grass. You can use dirt, gravel, clay, or anything else.
- Organics:
- Organics are living things on your plot, like trees and flowers. Your trees are not that great to be completely honest. Try making them a bit taller and add more leaves. Also, try not to make the leaves into a square shape as it would make it unrealistic. Add more around the plot along with more structures to take up the empty space.
- Good Luck<3
- -Tayter_Kat
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