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- Hello! I'm Tayter_Kat an i'll be reviewing you plot...
- Building:
- The small building is very dull. I suggest adding a roof. Also, add more buildings because it is necessary to rank up. the fountain look decent.
- Terrain/organics:
- the bottom of the island is very boxey, id suggest rounding it out. Also, the top of the island is very flat, add little hills and holes. If you add a pathway, it might also add to the look!
- last thing:
- it looks like you wanted the island to be the main showcase, but you can add more below the island to add to the island. more buildings or hand-made trees ect. do all of this and you will be fine!
- -Tayter_Kat
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