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- Novice Review:
- Still a decent plot, but theres still stuff you can work on!
- I do want to preface by saying that builds and plots are judged in default, so unfortunately i wont have the "best results" you speak of x3
- SO! As i said previously, its a nice take on The Shire, but it seems empty in the plot. So again, it may be a good idea to add some bigger trees to create atmosphere around the plot, and it may be a good idea to add more hobbit homes around. I know its not exactly according to the books or movies, but still, it doesnt have to be x3
- Your organics on the plot are okay, but try to make the leaves puff up more to make them more tree-like. I suggest using world-edit, with a high air percentage! (If youre unsure of what that is, just ask a mod and im sure we'll do our best to help out!)
- Hope this helps!
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