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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far but to be ranked its not done yet! Theres very little structure on the plot which is no good D:
- Add structures thoughout the plot, things that really catch your eye! Make sure they have multiple layers and detailing as well:D The trees look good and the terrain is okay though the plot could definitely use more of it. Good start so far and i wish you luck!
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