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- Hello ItzSanti!
- My name is xDraghun and today i will be reviewing your plot! Lets start of with your structures.
- Your tents need a lot more detail and depth. Add stairs/slabs for extra detailing and maybe add a tarp over it. Your ship needs a lot of detail added to it. If you look at it now, it seems a little too squarish to be a ship. Work on your sail some more too. You bridges also look plain and flat.
- Your trees dont really match the sandy theme. You could also work on giving them more leaves and adding branches/roots.
- You terrain is pretty flat and your hills need some smoothing done to the hills. Try smoothing the edges of your plot as well. Add other blocks to the terrain also to add color and variation such as clay, sandstone, etc. You could also add cactus/ sugar cane to the plot for a realistic effect.
- You plot still needs to be worked on before you can rank up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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