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2014-09-05 Workshop: more summarizing

Sep 5th, 2014
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  1. Greg Malivuk
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  4. detention: when a student has to stay after school for one or two hours, silently in a classroom with a teacher
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  6. Elementary: K-5 or K-6
  7. Middle School: 6-8 or Junior High: 7-9
  8. High School: 9-12 or 10-12
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  10. Tom's story - introduction, not the main idea of the article
  11. other discipline (detention, suspension) - it's a topic, but also not the main idea.
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  13. A principal in Ohio decided to change the behavior of students by calling their parents and inviting them to watch their children's classes.
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  15. maybe use two shorter sentences:
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  17. A principle in Ohio chose a new way to change students' behavior. He called their parents and invited them to watch their children's classes. The students' behavior improved. More and more schools now use this new way to discipline students.
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