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- Novice Review:
- Nice plot so far, but theres some things i think you should work on before you can rank up!
- First ill talk about your terrain,
- Right now its a bit too flat and a little too busy on the eyes. The sands contrast too much, so try to have one of them more prominent than the other so give your eyes more of a break. The height of the terrain doesnt count as levels of terrain since its generally all flat. Try to have more levels by making mountains hills caves or whatever you want. Just make sure to keep it more or less smooth and not so rough. The spring in the middle doesnt make much sense. The water isnt flowing in any particular direction and normally a small pool would have been made by the water eroding the ground it lands on.
- The organics on a plot dont make much sense. Its very boxy and unclear of what it actually is. Smooth it out and round it more to make it seem more realistic. I believe you said it was a stegosaurus, so google some pictures and use those as references to make your organic the best it can be. Also, adding custom cacti around the plot and perhaps some small trees around the spring might be a good idea to fill up the plot more.
- Theres only one very small structure on the plot, and it doesnt have much depth or detail on it. Make sure to make it bigger and add layers to it to create the depth, and use slabs, stairs, fences, buttons etc to detail your structure. Be careful though, too much detail will make your structure look messy and unorganized. Adding more structures around the plot to break up the empty spaces is also recommended. Your balloon is quite boxy as well, so make sure to round it out ad best you can, and maybe use colors that better match your theme.
- Good luck! I hope this review helps!
- (Also thanks for lettin me own the house xD )
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