I've written all the rhyming words in the original song and then written what it should line up with in your mix. I've kind of improvised in some areas because you completely skipped some lines. (?) means I didn't recognise the word. Ignore all syllables in brackets, they're just there to help identify the word. The notes "Remove/Add words" refer to the line they're written on, that is all words leading up to that mentioned rhyming word. Eg. you need to removed the words "keep saying" in the (Mc)Cree line. The original mix I used for this was https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4feUSTS21-8 at 50% volume. Your mix is here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0VNeNqpFmgU

Original	Your mix	Notes

==Verse 1==

Three		Three
Tree		Team
(Be)lieve	(Be)lieve	Lengthen "Be" in Believe.
Seat		(Bomb)king	Remove words.

Three		Three
Dean (?)	(Mc)Cree	Remove words. Currently synced to the start of "copy."
Me		See		Draw it out longer.
(fantas)y	(E)vie		Add words

Example:
"One - to the one - to the one - to the three
ANDROXUS is - a copy of McCree
It - will - be - fun, your - face - to - see
When we go - a-head - and - nerf - E-vie"