Miscellaneous Fixes 11

High Mountain tooltip.
>Visit the high mountains where basilisks and harpies are found.
Change it to "Visit the high mountains." because it is the sole tooltip that describes what creatures can be found there.

Bazaar tooltip.
>Visit the Bizarre Bazaar, where the demons and corrupted beings hang out.
Remove "the" before "demons".

Owca tooltip.
>Visit the sheep village of Owca, known for its pit where a person is hung on the pole weekly to be gang-raped by the demons.
"Visit the sheep village of Owca, where demons force the villagers to sacrifice someone to get gang-raped regularly."
The second part after the comma should be cut entirely after you've disbanded Vapula's horde.

Salon tooltip.
>Visit the salon for hair services.
"Visit the goblin-run hair salon for services."

There are three empty lines between the hair growth message and the Isabella night time scene's first line.
>Your hair’s growth has reached a new threshold, giving you moderately long, blonde hair.
>Something odd happens during the night...

Move the Leave button in that same scene to the second slot so it's next to Drink.

Kitsune sex menu.
Change "Use L-Aid" to "Use Lactaid", "Use OviElix" to "Use OviElixer", "FuckAss" to "Fuck Ass", and "Tentacles..." to "Tentacles".

Kiha sex menu.
Change "Give I.Drft" to "Give I.Draft"

>​ERROR. LEVEL UP PUSHED WHEN PC CANNOT LEVEL OR GAIN PERKS. PLEASE REPORT THE STEPS TO REPRODUCE THIS BUG TO THE THREAD.
1.) Have a file loaded that is ready to level up.
2.) Load from file a save that isn't (maybe also works with non-file saves, who knows.)
3.) The Level Up button stays there during the "Loading save..." screen.
4.) Press the Level Up button.

Nephila.
>and you feel the tentacle slowly slide deeper.
Move the virginity loss to happen after this.

There are three empty lines between the hair growth message and the Nephila cravings.
>Your hair’s growth has reached a new threshold, giving you very long, blonde hair.
>Images of you being lovingly filled with an anemone’s aphrodisiac and then fucked relentlessly fill your mind.

Phoenix encounter.
>“Get ready! I’m going to pound you so HARD!”
Remove "so" and unbold "hard".

Sheila.
>No sooner do you than she jumps you,
What?

>yes! Oh god, rub my button harder!”
Missing capitalization.

>“Can I what? What do you want me to do?” you ask, narrowing your eyes.
"Can you what? You ask her what she wants you to do as you narrow your eyes."

>“Well?”
"You repeat your question to her."

>“... you’re still the best.”
A space too many.

>Man, what?! Your expression speaks volumes, and she launches into a hurried explanation without a word from you.
Remove "Man, what?!"

>“... So long as we keep making more.”
Remove excess spacing.

>“... I missed you.”
Another one. Maybe just ctrl + F through Sheila's scenes for these at this point.

Using Wait makes the New Game button appear in the top-left, replacing the Main Menu one with text like
>You lie down to resume sleeping for the remaining three hours.

>You snap partway out of your post-coital, boob-induced daze. “Uh?”
Remove "Uh?"

>“Yeah, you’re right. They’re... nice.”
"You tell her that yeah, she's right. They're... nice."

>“What is... my hair... ?”
More bad spacing.

>This... creature... will certainly do its best to plug both your holes.
Replace second ellipsis with a comma.

>Your crying devolves into heated moans of pleasure and longing.
Virginity loss for both should happen after this sentence.

>“Oh... oh Sheila; let me love you 'til the morning comes!”
Remove this completely and change the next paragraph to start as: "Telling Sheila you want to love her until the morning comes, she blushes."

>“Were you?” you ask.
"Was she?"

>“Maybe I could, maybe I couldn’t. After all, you don’t even use your real name around me...”
"After all, she doesn't even use her real name around you."

Sheila turned into a demon, but the Stats menu lists "Sheila’s Corruption: 80"
Something is off here and should be looked into.

Goblin fight.
>overwhelmed with the desire to breed. If you don’t finish this soon you’ll give in to this potent drug!
There is no lust damage indicator after this status effect despite raising your lust.

If an anemone distances herself from you it looks like she does absolutely nothing for two turns afterwards if you Wait or Fantasize (this may not be limited to these two, they were just the actions I did).

Plains.
>the bunny-lass is STILL frozen and staring.
Italics instead of capitalization.

Sandtrap encounter.
When presented with Fight and Leave, move Leave to the second slot.

Gnoll encounter.
>ith two steps, she’s inside your guard, but all she does is wave her hand in front of your nose.
She does this even if she's distanced from me.

>When you last sit up, dizzy, you find that the hyena has disappeared.
"at" before "last".

Bunny plains encounter.
>(If you’re going to sex her, which of her body parts will you use?
Redundant line. Remove completely.

>Of course if you leave you doubt you’ll find her again. Maybe a good fucking will clear her head long enough for her to figure out how to leave this land and return to wherever she came from?
I know it's originally a holiday encounter, but are there any restrictions to this scene at all right now? If not, this excerpt makes very little sense.

Isabella.
>We don’t vant you to suffer heat-stroke on the vay back!Ooooh... ”
Missing space and one extra.

Masturbate.
> Your sex quivers as the pleasure overwhelms you,
An errant space at the beginning.

The Gro+ and Reducto menus should have the same order of body parts between the two.

>your passage rippling and contracting around your fingers.A strange feeling builds in your breasts as your nipples seem to tighten and quiver with anticipation.
Missing space.

Bee TF.
>cracking and popping as a rounded bee-like abdomen grows in place of your old tail.
I had a drider abdomen before this, not a tail. The text should properly reflect this.

Urta.
>Barkardi 151.
Let's not do this kind of shit.

>​No way! You’re not going to do that in front of EVERYONE.
Replace "EVERYONE." with "everyone!" Also, make the Next button here move you to the menu you just came from instead of the bar one.

Ovi elixer egg laying.
>It plops into the puddle with a splash, and you find yourself feeling visibly delighted to be laying such healthy eggs.
Virginity loss should be moved to happen after this sentence.

>Your wails quieted down and became a mess of heaving sighs and groans.
This sentence shouldn't be in past tense.

>Realizing you’re about to give birth, you rip off your inquisitor’s robes before it can be ruined by what’s coming.
This standalone single-sentence paragraph is repeated in the next one as:
>You realize something is about to be birthed, and you shed your inquisitor’s robes before it can be ruined by what’s coming.
This is of course completely redundant, and the first one should be removed if the second one is there.

>You push hard and the large egg pops free at last, making you sigh with relief as it drops into the pool of slime.
Virginity loss should be moved to happen after this sentence.

>You make wet 'schlick’ing sounds
The parser is touching things it shouldn't here.

>In time your wits return, leaving you with the realization that you are no longer pregnant.
The second part of this sentence is quite a stupid way to end the scene on. Of course you're not going to be pregnant after laying all the eggs, what kind of moron wrote this?

Arian's sex menu Double Pen button should have a period at the end of it.

>further encouraging him to do so, by looping your tail around his waist.
"further encouraging him to do so by tightening your tail around his waist."
A chance since you already do so earlier in the scene with much of the same wording.

Minotaur fight.
>The animalistic scent of it seems to get inside you, the musky aroma burning a path of liquid heat to your groin.
This attack raises lust but doesn't have a lust damage indicator.

Infected hellhound fight.
>You sidestep the gush of wormy fluid, letting it splatter against the rocks behind you. (1) The idea of being covered in the beast’s infested seed arouses you slightly, but you shake your head violently and clear away the unwelcome thought.
I don't think that lust damage indicator is in the right place. Unless the move is supposed to hit twice and the one at the end is just missing?

>this time managing to line its two dog-dicks up to your holes correctly.
Move both virginity loss messages to happen after this sentence.

Hellhound.
>before suddenly pulling his heads back and slamming his twin dicks into your virgin, slavering fuck-hole and your virgin asshole.
Move both virginity loss messages to happen after this sentence.

Ceraph.
>holding his hand beneath your freely drooling pussy to collect a palmful of slippery girl-honey. He holds it up in front of her nose and sniffs it,
That "her" should be "his".

>the two emotions so confused that you feel yourself getting harder from being treated like a house-pet.
But I don't have a dick here.

Phylla's scenes have a bunch of tilde's where dashes should be for cut-off sentences. It's probably easier to ctrl + F those.

>All five males thrust their cocks forward in unison.
Move vaginal virginity loss to happen after this sentence.

>skewered by dicks like a cabob.
We might need to ask Wombat about this one, but I don't think that's the correct spelling of it.

Incubus mechanic.
>as you’re double-penetrated by a single demon.Your hymen is torn, robbing you of your virginity. Your muff is now a little loose.  You have lost your anal virginity.  The incubus smirks
Wrong spacing.

The Farm is still messed up after you get the Corrupted Farm content prompt with the text
>Again, you find yourself standing on the bluff overlooking the farm, and you feel yourself filled with unholy rage at the woman below who stands against you and your plans for this piece of property. Do you put your plan into motion now or later?
It prompts you Now, Later, and Never. Later should put you in the regular farm's menu, but instead ot puts you in the corrupted farm's with the text:
>You stare for a moment longer, then decide not to do anything just yet. You will show mercy she does not deserve... for now.
After you leave and come back it will act and display as the regular farm as per usual.
Also, either make the corrupted farm prompt only appear once per day instead of every three visits or better yet add a Corrupt button in the bottom-left-most slot in the regular farm's menu after seeing it once that prompts the corrupt prompt with Now, Later, and Never.
The first issue about Later putting you in the corrupted farm's menu has been brought up before, was it broken in more than one place?

Change the Leave option in the Stables menu to Back.

Vapula threesome.
>is released with a loud POP.
'POP'

Phoenix tower revisit.
>You make your way back to the high mountains. Next, you hike up the narrow ledges and crevices of the high mountains, slowly but steadily climbing toward a snow-capped peak.
-
>You remember where the tower is. You make your way back to the tower.
"You once again hike up the narrow ledges and crevices of the high mountains towards a familiar snow-capped peak. Eventually, you make your way back to the squat, thick stone tower on the mountainside."

The alraune encounter forever having a grayed out Leave button is rather weird and stands out. If it really can't be used again after the first time it might be better to just remove it entirely.

Spider-morph fight.
>which upon closer inspection, appear to be actually be part of her body
Remove the first "be".

>The spider-girl lunges forward with her mouth open, her two needle-like fangs closing rapidly.
I'm fairly sure it means "closing in".

>The female spider-morph squirts a concentrated spray of her webs directly at your face! You pull your weapon back evasively and the webbing goes wide, missing entirely.
This makes little sense. She already glued my weapon to a nearby tree, what is happening here?

>thickening  and ready to penetrate
Double space.

>She grabs your head in that moment, guiding you down with a weak tug to place your lips upon her breast, and with a smile, you start to suckle the chocolate skin of her nub.
But she has onyx colored nipples, that's not anywhere close to chocolate skin. She's not a nigger, she has porcelain white skin for fucks sake.

>You bottom out and slap your balls into her soaked taint, meaty, blighted demonic shaft twitching happily as it prepares to unload.
That is definitely not a proper sentence.

Drider bondage fuck tooltip.
>This scene requires you to have a fitting cock, some way to bind her and sufficient arousal.
Comma after "her".

Jojo (copied from the thread so it doesn't get lost).
>For the next few hours I took the time to lay each and every villager to rest before praying over them all.
I know Jojo is monk and all, so he's very fit, but there is no fucking way he buried everyone in a few hours by himself.  Even accounting for all the people that were likely taken away, there would be far too many corpses.  His was a not a small village. He had 16 siblings and his wasn't even the largest family in the village.

Shouldra.
>rabbing a hold of your glans with both hands (eliciting a sharp inhale from you) and impaling herself on your pole with only the slightest hint of discomfort.
Stupid parenthesis text.

Aiko.
>Her arrows thud into the targets one after another, maintaining a beautifully dense grouping.She’s quite good!
Spacing.

The second time you encounter Aiko the Fight button is available, but on the third time when the Spar button is added it suddenly requires a corruption check.

If you go into Aiko's Sex menu and use Back, her entire main menu is rearranged completely to what I believe what it is when you have a high affection with her? In this version of her menu there once again is no corruption check for Fight either.

If the Great Tree is added to the Places menu, actually make the game tell you so at the same time you find your way back to her. Something like "You feel confident you can make your way back to Aiko's tree now with little effort." followed by the usual bold line signifying you've unlocked something in the Places menu.

>She’s every bit as peppy and effervescent as always.The whole clearing is bathed in a soft azure glow
Spacing.

Yamata fight.
>“Tsk tsk, leaving so soon?” the kitsune says, popping up in front of you suddenly as you attempt to make your escape.
But I didn't try to escape at all. This just ended up being a regular attack. That doesn't make any sense.

>depraved thoughts!You look at the
Spacing.

>let Aiko finish her sisteror end her yourself.
Spacing.

>Aiko affection: 103
Aiko's affection is not capped at 100 nor is it a percentage like all other affection stats.

Aiko's Get Licked tooltip should be made to be in-line with other sexual tooltips.

>You tell her that if she wants her ball back, she’ll behave like a good pet.
The Humiliate option references her ball as if this happens right after I met her for the very first time when I used the Fight button to get here.

>as it impacts a tree with a loud THUD!, making you duck in defense.
Nice formatting.

>“Now you’ll do the SAME!”You block Aiko’s slash with your greatshield!
Spacing.

>She takes a twisted pleasure in slowly removing your armorName,
I don't in reading through this broken shit.

>painful grip on your earType ear, and whispers, “I’m going to enjoy this.”
At least that makes one of us.

>Her fingertips slowly slide down your flat breasts,
My character is a guy, who wrote this shit?

>Your camp is silent as your companions are sleeping right now.
It says this at 11 PM, but everyone is still awake.

Latexy's Feed Her buttons Cum, Indirect and Cum, Direct do not need those commas, the same goes for the female variants.

Latexy's Use Her button is removed if you're not aroused enough instead of grayed out.

In the Use Her menu, move DickFuckHer to the first slot, DomWithVag to the second, and RideGooCock to the third.

>Latexy’s maleness is now a big, beast pecker!
Redundant comma.

>She nods and casually hefts her tits in her hands, bouncing them back and forth with a slutty expression on her face.
Latexy has A cups here. The text doesn't feel like it properly reflects that with this.

The cat sisters' sprite in Tel'Adre doesn't clear if you press Leave. The 8-bit one specifically, but probably counts for both.

Submitting to Akbal.
>You awake in your camp feeling dangerous, powerful and fiercely satisfied.
The New Game button shows in the top-left during this, and it also has Akbal's sprite still when it shouldn't anymore as you're back in your camp as it says.

One of the options involving Urta's existence does not have supplementary text, unlike pretty much every other option no matter how redundant it might be.

The red "Old" text in the sprite selection in the Options menu should be green instead.

When Amily is still in the Town Ruins, change her menu to be Appearance, Talk, Sex, Both in that order. This adds Appearance to her before she joins you in your camp.

Amily's Sex and Both buttons in the Town Ruins don't seem to unlock at 33 lust.

They could also use tooltips when your female and have low affection with her that say she's not interested in females.

Amily.
>You can only start in shock and disbelief at this statement.
"stare", not "start".

>[Amily has joined you as a lover.]
Why are these brackets intead of parentheses?

Change the Nevermind in Amily's Take Charge menu to Back.

>It is thick and creamy and piquant, putting you somewhat in mind of well-aged cheddar, warm from her body-heat and very nourishing.
I'm sorry, what? Please, someone save Amily from this writing.

>But, take care out there; there’s a lot of freaky monsters that will do the most unspeakable things to a woman if they can catch her.”
The "woman" could be changed to "girl" if you're a child or teen.

Change the "Shrouded Woman" button text in the Wet Bitch to "Cloaked Woman" to converse a little space to prevent too much resizing.

Amily fertility potion scene.
>Izma plucks the bottle of Amily’s hands
"from" or "out of", not "of".

>to dominate my pussy and fill it full of you... Ooooh...”
Dash instead of the first ellipsis.

Buying cupcakes from Frosty doesn't seem to cost you any gems at all.

Secretarial succubus.
>as an orgasm builds.Each of the
Spacing.