the Cruelty Squad and Xavier crossover story

from /hhg/ Helluva Hotel General #971
I hate all of you edition
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I have returned from my nearly 3 month absence with the Cruelty Squad and Xavier: Renegade Angel story I was writing. I honestly don't know how much time I've spent on it but damn was it a lot so I hope you guys enjoy it. Special thanks to viceroy for helping me out throughout the whole thing.
The story - https://ghostbin.com/FQrGO
Stuff I needed to cut to improve pacing - https://ghostbin.com/7hNqM
A version with most of the cut content spliced back in https://ghostbin.com/6VDZX
Side note, after episode 7, the preview for season 2 and the news with hazbin, I honestly don't plan on sticking around, I hate the direction the shows are taking and the drama in the thread doesn't help.
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The story is good and I give it my full endorsement.
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>It's finished
Fking based. I thought you stopped.
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What exactly do you hate about the direction the show is taking?
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>>44521034
nah, no way I was just gonna let my story not get finished
>>44521116
it's a lot of things like saying there's a much greater emphasis on musicals in season 2, episode 7 being rushed to hell to meet the Halloween deadline, but the straw that broke the camels back for me was the hellevator because it made me realize how little regard they have for the world they're building and any explanation I can come up with for it would be much more interesting than what it actually is
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The hell-evator broke the camel's back? Do you think its a lazy depiction of how transportation should work in Hell?
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absolutely
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What do you think would've been a better alternative?
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>The Phenex portion
Holy sht I love it. It gets the character down. Like it's perfect. Better than I ever could've imagined. I am happy to say I gave this my blessing.
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oh sht, welcome back dude.

you should post that onto A03
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>>44521741
Given that the rings are sideways ring worlds, I have no fking clue. Pretty much anything but a big fking box that can fit at least 4 floors in it with ample headroom but just doesn't for some reason.
>>44521764 (You)
I'll leave that up to someone else if they want to. Feel free to do whatever you want with it, it's not mine anymore, it's the threads.
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>I'll leave that up to someone else if they want to. Feel free to do whatever you want with it, it's not mine anymore, it's the threads.

are you sure?... you put a lot of hard work into it?. it feel wrong to me, btw I am the anon who said that "Cruelty guy & Xavier are going to be best friends."

I understand why you won't show up here, hell, as the guy who saves stories on here. I don't even talk on here, since everyone is fighting all the time now, I've just been making my own crossover story.

Dead Cells x MMHOPH: https://pastebin.com/hWRqtwU5

why did I do this?... because 1. I can, 2. I feel bad for this show that got killed before S2 come out. and 3, since they're only one season I can go nuts on the world-building.

this has been my life so far
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Art is for others, not the artist.
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>Art is for others, not the artist.

done

https://archiveofourown.org/works/36239239/chapters/90339052