game_chars_char_Mom.rpy

game_chars_char_Mom.rpy

Lines 171, 180, 201, 232, 249, 265, 562, 597, 1183, 1195, 1205, 2515, : "Hey mom" to "Hey, Mom"
Line 185: "Well hon" to "Well, hon"
Line 186: "Hey come on" to "Hey, come on"
Line 192: "Oh wow! Look at this mom!" to "Oh, wow! Look at this, Mom!"
Line 194: "at hon" to "at, hon"
Line 195: "supervillans" to "supervillains"
Line 195: "Night City, have a look" to "Night City. Have a look"
Line 195: "MyHero Magazine" to "'MyHero Magazine'"
Line 198: "favourites" to "favorites" (American English)
Lines 199, 207: "superhero & celebrity" to "superhero and celebrity"
Line 201: "MyHero" to "'MyHero'"
Line 203: "did sweetie" to "did, sweetie"
Line 206: "villan" to "villain"
Line 213: "ok sweetie" to "ok, sweetie"
Line 214: "Startled you" to "Startled, you"
Line 214: "and more" to "and are more"
Line 215: "Woah shit" to "Whoah, shit"
Line 215: "Sorry mom" to "Sorry, Mom"
Line 223: "visably" to "visibly"
Line 223: "sereneley" to "serenely"
Line 227: "You and mom" to "You and Mom"
Lines 233, 250, 266: "course sweety" to "course, sweety"
Line 254: "affect you of course" to "affect you, of course"
Line 255: "cop out mom" to "cop out, Mom"
Line 262: "Wel....that's" to "Well... that's"
Line 267: "divorce right" to "divorce, right"
Line 273: "though huh" to "though, huh"
Line 295: "Hell I don't know!" to "Hell, I don't know!"
Line 298: "broke our home up" to "broke up our home" (don't end sentences with a preposition, unless it's colloquial, in which case ignore this, YMMV)
Line 321: "happy Mom" to "happy, Mom"
Line 322: "crap will you" to "crap, will you"
Line 342: "me 2 half" to "me two half"
Line 347: "Excuse me Miss, can you add, more vanilla to this?" to "Excuse me, Miss. Can you add more vanilla to this?"
Line 348: "After the Barista brings her drink back." to "After the barista brings back her drink."
Line 364: "HEY STUPID BITCH" to "HEY, STUPID BITCH"
Line 364: "TASTE" to "TASTES"
Line 366: "Come on Billy" to "Come on, Billy"
Line 380: "Excuse me ma'am...remember me? HI!" to "Excuse me, ma'am... remember me? Hi!"
Line 382: "apparent, that" to "apparent that"
Lines 405, 407, 445, 476, 507, 675, 677, 756, 768, 1062, 1240, 1381, 1430, 2231, 2238, 2241, 2356, 2424, 2888, : "your Mom" to "your mom"
Line 419: "but you notice your mom grimace" to "but you notice her grimace"
Lines 440, 471, 502: "takes over and she" to "takes over, and she"
Line 445: "Within moments your" to "Within moments, you're"
Line 449: "Soon you feel an orgasm building up and you're" to "Soon you feel an orgasm building up, and you're"
Line 460: "Aftwards" to "Afterwards"
Lines 466, 528: "each others" to "each other's"
Line 493: "ensamble" to "ensemble"
Line 511: "soon your shoving" to "soon you're shoving"
Line 539: "Oh by all" to "Oh, by all"
Line 545: "Like that baby" to "Like that, baby"
Line 547: "expextantly" to "expectantly"
Line 548: "Any second now right sweetie" to "Any second now, right, sweetie"
Line 552: "you let it go unleashing" to "you let it go, unleashing"
Lines 552, 585, 707, 1293, 1544, 1546, 2339, 2345, 2920, 2929: "moms" to "mom's"
Line 553: "Mom doesn't slow down, just keeps" to "Mom doesn't slow down, she just keeps" or "Mom doesn't slow down. She just keeps"
Lines 564, 598: "hero you" to "hero, you"
Line 565: "Weeeell" to "Welllll" (Weeeell sounds like wheel instead of well. Just sayin')
Line 573: "lets" to "let's"
Line 576: "recieved Billy" to "received, Billy"
Line 576: "Oh and" to "Oh, and"
Line 576: "answer if" to "answer, if"
Line 576: "zero I'm" to "zero, I'm"
Line 576: "plan pumpkin" to "plan, pumpkin"
Line 578: "Fair enough mom." to "Fair enough, Mom."
Line 587: "How long has is been." to "How long has it been?"
Lines 601, 617: "then huh" to "then, huh"
Line 608: "Well Billy" to "Well, Billy"
Line 609: "as you hand" to "as your hand"
Line 611: "So do it Billy, don't you know to "So do it, Billy. Don't you know"
Line 623: "Well you've" to "Well, you've"
Like 625: "Ten mins" to "Ten minutes" (who actually says "mins" out loud? writing all the time, sure, but out loud? getdafuckouttahere...)
Line 627: "Pursuade me kiddo." to "Persuade me, kiddo."
Line 709: "Oh Fuck Billy" to "Oh fuck, Billy"
Lines 709, 801: "your Dad" to "your dad"
Line 710: "mom anywhich way" to "mom any which way" or "mom any way" (better)
Line 710: "and she's moaning" to "and she moans"
Line 748: "just kept going" to "just keep going" (don't mix tenses!!)
Lines 748, 1219, 1385, 1427, 1428, 2008: "your Mom's" to "your mom's"
Line 748: "Your mom probably didn't even notice" to "Your mom probably doesn't even notice" (don't mix tenses!!)
Line 754: "for the 5th time" to "for the fifth time"
Line 754: "unconscious" to "unconsciousness" or "being unconscious"
Line 768: "you've got your your head" to "you've got your head" (duplicate word)
Line 834: "You feel your mom have an orgasm, and with each spasm, she tightens hard on your cock, and soon, you're cumming as well." to "You feel your mom have an orgasm. With each spasm, she tightens hard on your cock. Soon, you're cumming as well." (that, is, a, lot, of, commas)
Line 840: "for 2 hours" to "for two hours"
Line 841: "Eventualy your" to "Eventually, your"
Line 854: "building and" to "building, and"
Line 865: "Well that was nice." to "Well, that was nice."
Line 869: "Your mom ushers you out of her room. Sorry sweety but Mommy can't play with you all day." to "Your mom ushers you out of her room. "Sorry, sweety, but Mommy can't play with you all day.""
Line 875: "you're done. Your mom is naked as well...Still looking" to "you're done, your mom is naked as well... still looking"
Line 904: "Yes Mommy" to "Yes, Mommy"
Line 905: "yes mommy" to "Yes, Mommy"
Line 907: "Thankfully she" to "Thankfully, she"
Line 907: "applying as much" (Does this sound weird to you? I know what you're saying, but it seems like it should be said differently. Idk, YMMV)
Line 912: "well" to "Well"
Line 914: "Uh....Thank you mommy..." to "Uh... Thank you, Mommy..."
Line 923: "Hmmmmmm That's" to "Hmmmmmm, that's" or "Hmmmmmm. That's"
Line 925: "kind good too" to "kind of good too"
Line 943: "Thank you Mommy." to "Thank you, Mommy."
Line 954: "catching her breathe" to "catching her breath"
Line 955: "So....You think" to "So... you think" or "So, you think" (better)
Line 957: "sorry WHAT" to "sorry, WHAT"
Line 958: "I'm sorry Mommy!" to "I'm sorry, Mommy!"
Line 973: "Yes Mommy." to "Yes, Mommy."
Line 975: "Yes mommy." to "Yes, Mommy."
Line 981: "Do as your told" to "Do as you're told"
Line 998: "with handiwork" to "with her handiwork" or "with your handiwork" (whichever you were trying to say here)
Line 999: "Thank you mommy" to "Thank you, Mommy"
Line 1017: "says as climbs" to "says as she climbs"
Line 1021: "Yes please" to "Yes, please"
Line 1032: "Fuck it's" to "Fuck, it's"
Line 1034: "Yeth Mommy." to "Yeth, Mommy."
Line 1036: "No Mommy" to "No, Mommy"
Line 1038: "I'm Sorry Mommy" to "I'm sorry, Mommy"
Line 1060: "Suddenly grabs you" to "Suddenly, she grabs you" or "She suddenly grabs you" (better)
Lines 1079, 2272, 2726: "mothers" to "mother's"
Line 1101: "Yes you have" to "Yes, you have"
Lines 1105, 1125: "Thank you Billy" to "Thank you, Billy"
Lines 1109, 1129, 1166: "what are you" to "What are you"
Line 1109, 1129: "you sweetheart" to "you, sweetheart"
Lines 1142, 1150, 1160: "forgive me Mom" to "forgive me, Mom"
Lines 1143, 1151, 1161: "begging and" to "begging, and"
Line 1152: "things 'ok' young" to "things 'ok,' young"
Line 1162: "mother, I" to "mother; I" or "mother. I"
Line 1175: "Jesus it's" to "Jesus, it's"
Line 1176: "day, lights" to "day, the lights"
Line 1177: "Fucks" to "Fuck's"
Line 1191: "yeah Billy" to "yeah, Billy"
Line 1200: "From me Mom" to "From me, Mom"
Line 1217: "My cocked however wanted" to "My cock, however, wanted"
Line 1219: "body last." to "body last night."
Lines 1235, 1276, 1361: "best Mom" to "best, Mom"
Line 1240: "tugging on." to "tugging on it."
Line 1241: "that your helping" to "that you're helping"
Line 1245: "That's it bitch"  to "That's it, bitch"
Line 1248, 1303: "Thanks Mom" to "Thanks, Mom"
Line 1248: "clean my off the floor" to "clean my cum off the floor"
Lines 1261, 1319, 1401: "pick up floozy" to "pick up a floozy"
Lines 1279, 1364: "gentally" to "gently"
Line 1280: "tip then" to "tip, then"
Line 1285: "True to her words she" to "True to her word, she"
Line 1304: "Yeah yeah yeah" to "Yeah, yeah, yeah"
Line 1331: "Take it all you slut" to "Take it all, you slut"
Line 1337: "while shoot" to "while you shoot" or "while shooting" (first is better, imo)
Line 1341: "quick right" to "quick, right"
Line 1347: "You Selfish Fuck" to "You selfish fuck"
Lines 1348, 1437: "Fuck sorry" to "Fuck, sorry"
Line 1377: "Cry you dirty slut" to "Cry, you dirty slut"
Line 1378: "bawl, while" to "bawl while"
Line 1381: "and starts fucking" to "and start fucking" (Unless you're Skwisgaar Skwigelf. Then starts fucking ams dildos.)
Line 1384: "Fuck yeah you like it" to "Fuck yeah, you like it"
Line 1386: "you? be sure" to "you? Be sure"
Lines 1409, 1432: "against mom's" to "against your mom's" or "against Mom's"
Line 1416: "I said No Billy!" to "I said no, Billy!" or "I said 'No,' Billy!"
Line 1417: "Yeah you did!" to "Yeah, you did!"
Line 1422: "Please Billy...Don't do this." to "Please, Billy... Don't do this."
Line 1423: "pregnant Mom" to "pregnant, Mom"
Line 1428: "Once done you" to "Once done, you"
Line 1429: "Thanks mom" to "Thanks, Mom"
Line 1432: "immediatly" to "immediately"
Line 1460: "Whoa....DeJaVu..." to "Whoah... Déjà vu..."
Line 1474: "outfit mom" to "outfit, Mom"
Lines 1530, 1555: "Yes master." to "Yes, Master."
Line 1531: "Meanwhile you" to "Meanwhile, you"
Line 1537: "responded to 5 texts, you've already cum 6 times" to "responded to five texts, you've already cum six times"
Line 1544: "the 7th time" to "the seventh time"
Lines 1586, 1602: "want some company?" to "Want some company?"
Line 1604: "For fucks sake, I got things to do Billy.....other than you." to "For fuck's sake, I got things to do, Billy. Other than you." or "For fuck's sake, I got things to do, Billy... other than you."
Line 1661: "Sorry Mom!" to "Sorry, Mom!"
Line 1666: "After another minute or two." to "After another minute or two..."
Line 1747: "Not my circus, Not my monkeys." to "Not my circus, not my monkeys." or "Not my circus. Not my monkeys."
Line 1764: "You walk into the bathroom, to find your mom passed out in the shower." to "You walk into the bathroom to find your mom passed out in the shower."
Lines 1766, 1813: "role model mother" to "role model, Mother"
Line 1785: "at 1 in the morning" to "at one in the morning"
Line 1791: "But's it's" to "But it's"
Line 1795: "You help your mom to bed, and as soon as she got to her bed, she flopped down and passed out." to "You help your mom to bed, and as soon as she gets there she flops down and passes out." (don't mix tenses!!)
Line 1819: "uh huh" to "Uh-huh"
Line 1820: "Shuddup Bill" to "Shuddup, Bill"
Line 1823: "my drunk Mom" to "my drunk mom"
Line 1827: "Man you" to "Man, you"
Line 1831: "while keep her balanced under" to "while you keep her balanced under" or "while keeping her balanced under" or "while keeping her balance under" (depending on what you meant to say, probably the first one)
Line 1835: "reaches back grabs your" to "reaches back and grabs your"
Line 1837: "help it mom" to "help it, Mom"
Line 1837: "Now finish your shower, so I can get you to bed" to "Now, finish your shower so I can get you to bed"
Line 1839: "Now let go" to "Now, let's go"
Line 1856: "Sure enough, your mom ended up slipping out of your hands and fell flat on her ass. She kept falling completely backward by holding onto your cock to keep some balance." to "Sure enough, your mom ends up slipping out of your hands and falls flat on her ass. She keeps from falling completely backward by holding onto your cock to keep some balance." (don't mix tenses!!)
Line 1861: "stop" to "Stop"
Line 1882: "You try to shove her away, but she refuses to let go of your one hand, and everytime you try to push her head away, she starts squeezing your balls a little painfully." to "You try to shove her away, but she refuses to let go of one of your hands. Every time you try to push her head away, she starts squeezing your balls a little painfully."
Line 1884: "That or she" to "That, or she"
Line 1889: "filling her mouth" to "filling it"
Line 1900: "Don't hold your breathe."  to "Don't hold your breath."
Line 1902: "She's appear to have passed out again." to "She appears to have passed out again."
Line 1903: "Goddamit!" to "Goddammit!"
Line 1929: "However this" to "However, this"
Line 1935: "puckered lick a" to "puckered like a" (your Freudian slip is showing)
Line 1939: "you get close she" to "you get close, she"
Line 1945: "Shhhh...Fuck me Markus!" to "Shhhh... Fuck me, Marcus!" (NOTE: As I pointed out while editing game_content_content_gamestart.rpy, on Line 67 the dad is called Marcus. However, here he is called Markus. This is a continuity error that needs to be fixed)
Line 1946: "But Mom!" to "But, Mom!"
Line 1950: "Damn you Globex! Damn you alcohol!" to "Damn you, Globex! Damn you, alcohol!"
Line 1954: "You're cut off as your mom shoves her tongue in your mouth again and uses her legs to make you thrust into her again." to "You're cut off as your mom shoves her tongue in your mouth and uses her legs to make you thrust into her again."
Line 1983: "Staring at your mom like that you can't help but feel your cock throb a little." to "Staring at your mom like that, you can't help but feel your cock throb a little."
Lines 1988, 2004: "shorts off . She's" to "shorts off. She's"
Line 1991: "Hilt to Tip" to "Hilt to tip"
Line 1992: "naughtyness" to "naughtiness"
Line 2001: "This is what happens when you drink too much," to "This is what happens when you drink too much."
Line 2007: "preassure" to "pressure"
Line 2008: "Once inside you" to "Once inside, you"
Line 2008: "when your cumming" to "when you're cumming"
Lines 2042, 2052: "Fuck me Billy" to "Fuck me, Billy"
Lines 2044, 2054: "names" to "name's"
Line 2081: "enter, you're Mom" to "enter, your mom"
Line 2104: "moaning, coming" to "moaning coming"
Line 2106: "Say bitch" to "Say, bitch"
Line 2125: "Damn this" to "Damn, this"
Lines 2158, 2184, 2217, 2251, 2293, 2326: "Hey Billy" to "Hey, Billy"
Lines 2159, 2185: "Thanks Mom" to "Thanks, Mom"
Lines 2161, 2817: "couch though" to "couch, though"
Line 2174: "I didn't she could" to "I didn't think she could"
Line 2175: "See you Mom" to "Seeing your mom"
Lines 2178, 2205: "couch sweetie" to "couch, sweetie"
Lines 2179, 2206: "movie 3 times" to "movie three times"
Lines 2179, 2206: "before you cock" to "before your cock"
Lines 2219, 2253: "You're the best Mom!" to "You're the best, Mom!"
Line 2231: "To your surprise your Mom" to "To your surprise, your mom"
Line 2233: "which makes it the experience" to "which makes the experience"
Line 2236: "At one point she grabs your spare hand, and guides your fingers into her." to "At one point, she grabs your spare hand and guides your fingers into her."
Line 2238: "inside your Mom" to "inside your mom"
Line 2241: "When your Mom sees you're about to cum she reaches" to "When your mom sees you're about to cum, she reaches"
Line 2242: "See what I mean. That's it...Cum for mommy! Cum for moommiieee!" to "See what I mean? That's it... Cum for Mommy! Cum for Mommyyyyy!" (moommiieee sounds like moo-mee. Also, you use y instead of the ie below)
Line 2243: "Afterwards you mom" to "Afterwards, your mom"
Line 2266: "Only if your jerking" to "Only if you're jerking"
Line 2272: "mothers" to "mother's"
Line 2275: "you start cum" to "you start to cum"
Line 2275: "gabs" to "grabs"
Line 2280: "hahaha! You're so easily riled up. Fine sweety, I'll leave you alone." to "Hahaha! You're so easily riled up. Fine, sweety, I'll leave you alone."
Line 2293: "CUM GUZZLERS volume 23" to "CUM GUZZLERS, Volume 23"
Line 2304: "your mom laying her" to "your mom is laying her"
Line 2312: "Before long you grab" to "Before long, you grab"
Line 2312: "roughly on shaft" to "roughly on the shaft" or "roughly on your shaft"
Line 2313: "done cumming your mom" to "done cumming, your mom"
Line 2313: "sucking and" to "sucking; and"
Line 2328: "hands to yourself!" to "hands to yourself?!"
Line 2338: "No thanks" to "No, thanks"
Line 2345: "your moms mouth" to "your mom's mouth"
Line 2350: "No I said" to "No, I said"
Line 2350: "full of cum." to "full of cum?"
Line 2350: "Look Billy" to "Look, Billy"
Line 2350: "Sometimes" to "sometimes"
Line 2351: "Now I've" to "Now, I've"
Line 2351: "The least you can do, is let" to "The least you can do is let"
Line 2352: "guilt tripping" to "guilt-tripping" (present participle requires hyphenation)
Line 2352: "into incest." to "into incest?"
Line 2356: "And with that your Mom" to "And with that, your mom"
Line 2356: "Your too" to "You're too"
Line 2356: "weak willed" to "weak-willed" (adjective, hyphenated)
Line 2356: "it, as your" to "it as your" or "it; your" (I would use the second one, esp. considering the following)
Line 2356: "though mind" to "though your mind"
Line 2360: "need bath" to "need a bath"
Line 2360: "help sweety" to "help, sweety"
Line 2399: "you both start watching the movie, while fucking each other" to "you both start watching the movie while fucking each other"
Line 2399: "on the sceen" to "on the screen"
Line 2405: "I love you my sweet boy" to "I love you, my sweet boy"
Line 2406: "I love you too Mom" to "I love you too, Mom"
Line 2422: "Incest is the best Cest volume 6...Really Mom?" to "Incest is the Best 'Cest, Volume 6... Really, Mom?"
Line 2424: "After a while your Mom" to "After a while, your mom"
Line 2425: "Man it's" to "Man, it's"
Line 2425: "I'm should turn the AC on" to "I should turn the AC on"
Line 2431: "off of you,but end" to "off of you, but end"
Line 2431: "And once the seal is broken you can't" to "And once the seal is broken, you can't"
Line 2443: "That's it Mommy" to "That's it, Mommy"
Line 2449: "moms" to "mom" (your moms, dawg)
Line 2449: "while she catches her breathe" to "while she catches her breath"
Line 2451: "that just" to "That just"
Line 2452: "ohh ....poor baby" to "Ohh ....poor baby"
Line 2452: "pepto" to "Pepto"
Line 2452: "like 2 gallons" to "like two gallons"
Line 2454: "unstaitable" to "insatiable" (or unstable? either way, it's makes for a hell of a weekend)
Line 2492: "exclussive" to "exclusive"
Line 2492: "already two movies"
Line 2492: "in production about" to "in production about him"
Line 2494: "May i call" to "May I call"
Line 2497: "than 3 months" to "than three months"
Line 2499: "asked Jules" to "asked, Jules"
Line 2502: "when at" to "when you're at"
Line 2506: "uh...Hi Mom, I'm on TV....again!" to "Uh... Hi, Mom, I'm on TV... again!"
Line 2507: "break but" to "break, but"
Line 2515: "Oh, hey Mom. Yeah I'm fine." to "Oh, hey, Mom. Yeah, I'm fine."
Line 2516: "I quickly cover the wet spot on my chest." to "You quickly cover the wet spot on your chest." (don't switch POV)
Line 2518: "okay Mom" to "okay, Mom"
Line 2521: "Sweet dreams honey." to "Sweet dreams, honey."
Line 2525: "To bad" to "Too bad"
Line 2554: "sorry Principal" to "sorry, Principal"
Line 2555: "put clothes on" to "put on clothes" (don't end a sentence with a preposition, unless this is colloquial in which case ignore, YMMV)
Line 2557: "Oh fuck!" to "Oh, fuck!"
Line 2558: "with you Billy" to "with you, Billy"
Line 2559: "sorry Ms. Larson" to "sorry, Ms. Larson"
Line 2559: "someplace private." to "someplace private?"
Line 2562: "do at whim" to "do on a whim" or "do at will"
Line 2565: "christ" to "Christ"
Line 2567: "If you won't then I will." to "If you won't, then I will."
Line 2569: "going fuck me" to "going to fuck me"
Line 2578: "Well you can let go" to "Well, you can let go"
Line 2581: "attention children" to "attention, children"
Line 2581: "spiggots" to "spigots"
Line 2582: "Oh Shit" to "Oh, shit"
Line 2584: "Normally kids," to "Normally, kids,"
Line 2585: "going on." to "going on?"
Lines 2604, 2616: "you honey" to "you, honey"
Line 2613: "next time she's already" to "next time, she's already"
Line 2619: "Thanks Mom" to "Thanks, Mom"
Line 2620: "or sandwich" to "or a sandwich?"
Line 2621: "No thanks" to "No, thanks"
Line 2621: "You're the best Mom" to "You're the best, Mom"
Line 2623: "Good night sweety." to "Good night, sweety."
Line 2656: "room. Don't" to "room, don't" or "room? Don't"
Lines 2660, 2661, 2668: "tatoo" to "tattoo"
Line 2660: "if you want?" to "if you want."
Line 2667: "So? what do you think?" to "So? What do you think?"
Line 2668: "Very Nice! uh...only...which one" to "Very nice! Uh... only... which one"
Line 2675: "Fuck yay" to "Fuck yeah" or "Fuck yes" ("Fuck yay" sounds like something you'd say at an a fucking hardcore amusement park)
Line 2675: "of Syrix" to "of the Syrix" or "of my Syrix"
Lines 2694, 2714: "Hi Sweety" to "Hi, Sweety"
Line 2696: "Now Billy" to "Now, Billy"
Line 2696: "havn't" to "haven't"
Line 2697: "Fuck I'm still" to "Fuck, I'm still"
Line 2697: "I pull out quickly before I can't" to "You pull out quickly before you can't" (POV)
Line 2698: "me!" to "me?!"
Line 2699: "disease carrying" to "disease-carrying"
Line 2699: "with a some" to "with some"
Lines 2704, 2725: "Good night sweetheart" to "Good night, sweetheart"
Line 2705: "there in confused" to "there confused"
Line 2717: "I know mom. And i love you for it." to "I know, Mom. And I love you for it."
Line 2719: "rythme" to "rhythm"
Line 2720: "Oh honey" to "Oh, honey"
Line 2722: "That's okay Mom, I probably" to "That's okay, Mom. I probably"
Line 2726: "your mothers" to "your mother's"
Line 2763: "Hey Billy" to "Hey, Billy"
Line 2763: "Do you have" to "do you have"
Line 2764: "do y" to "do y-"
Lines 2824, 2834: "well being" to "well-being"
Line 2824: "She evens hugs" to "She even hugs"
Line 2845: "ackwardly kisses" to "awkwardly kisses you"
Line 2855: "Porno" to "porno"
Line 2867: "Watching" to "watching"
Line 2872: "Sorry Ma'am!" to "Sorry, ma'am!"
Line 2889: "Hi Mom" to "Hi, Mom"
Line 2890: "Hi Billy" to "Hi, Billy"
Line 2891: "Hey Billy" to "Hey, Billy"
Line 2893: "Working out huh?" to "Working out, huh?"
Line 2893: "count Freddy" to "count, Freddy"
Line 2894: "Yes Ma'am" to "Yes, ma'am"
Line 2900: "Come one Freddy" to "Come on, Freddy"
Lines 2920, 2929: "your moms room" to "your mom's room"