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- Hey there! :3
- You're still adding very minimal additions to your plot from what we asked of you. Your plot still lacks larger trees and larger structure. There's a distinct lack of atmosphere too, which is always a very helpful addition to a plot. It can really bring the plot together. By this, I mean things like pathways, more wheat patches, more layers to the terrain etc.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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