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  1. Hey there!
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  3. So first of all, I want to say your terrain is really great! You have a good diversity with the hills and the flat areas. You've also created a nice image of atmosphere with the pathways and fence posts. I really like it ^.^ I also love the oasis area in the corner, although if I had one complaint, I would say mix some grass in with the dirt so it has more depth to the terrain :3
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  5. Secondly, your organics - You don't have any. Normally simple organics on plots would be custom trees, however I feel like on this plot, custom cacti could look nice :3 I made a plot similar to this and made my own cacti and it looked nice, have a try!
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  7. Lastly, structure. I think its okay detail wise, although the palette is a little strange with this terrain and the rest of the plot. Change that up a little bit and it'll be nice. I also like the tent. Maybe have a couple more of those around? ^.^
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  9. Good luck!
  10. - Dutty :3
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