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  1. 1  2:33a    11(@01AridLegion11) So..
  2. 0101,06  2:33a    11(@01AridLegion11) More on Veran?
  3. 01,06  2:33a    11(@01Plothole11) Sure.
  4. 0101,06  2:33a    11(@01AridLegion11) Right so.
  5. 0101,06  2:34a    11(@01AridLegion11) Let's start at the begining.
  6. 0101,06  2:34a    11(@01AridLegion11) He was born on earth about 20k years ago.
  7. 0101,06  2:34a    11(@01AridLegion11) But it starts before that.
  8. 0101,06  2:35a    11(@01AridLegion11) See, in the begining, the White God created the heavens and the earth.
  9. 0101,06  2:35a    11(@01AridLegion11) And then he created something in his image.
  10. 0101,06  2:35a    11(@01AridLegion11) He created the Los.
  11. 01,06  2:35a    11(@01Plothole11) Is there a Black God?
  12. 0101,06  2:35a    11(@01AridLegion11) No.
  13. 01,06  2:35a    11(@01Plothole11) Sorry, continue,
  14. 0101,06  2:35a    11(@01AridLegion11) There's a Red God though.
  15. 0101,06  2:36a    11(@01AridLegion11) And a Blue God.
  16. 01,06  2:36a    11(@01Plothole11) ...
  17. 0101,06  2:36a    11(@01AridLegion11) But yeah.
  18. 01,06  2:36a    11(@01Plothole11) Very AU apparently.
  19. 0101,06  2:36a    11(@01AridLegion11) Very, very, very fuvking AU.
  20. 0101,06  2:36a    11(@01AridLegion11) fucking*
  21. 0101,06  2:37a    11(@01AridLegion11) So, the Los ruled for mellenia unchallenged.
  22. 0101,06  2:37a    11(@01AridLegion11) But then Lucifer, fallen angels, blah blah.
  23. 0101,06  2:37a    11(@01AridLegion11) And so the White God decided to make a prison for them.
  24. 0101,06  2:38a    11(@01AridLegion11) The Warp, the Void beyond the Outer Gates.
  25. 01,06  2:38a    11(@01Plothole11) Are the Los like the original race?
  26. 0101,06  2:38a    11(@01AridLegion11) Kinda.
  27. 0101,06  2:38a    11(@01AridLegion11) They're sorta like Elves, but not.
  28. 01,06  2:38a    11(@01Plothole11) How powerful are they?
  29. 1  2:38a    11(@01AridLegion11) It means less in German.
  30. 01,06  2:38a    11(@01Plothole11) Alright.
  31. 0101,06  2:38a    11(@01AridLegion11) That's...
  32. 0101,06  2:39a    11(@01AridLegion11) Complicated.
  33. 0101,06  2:39a    11(@01AridLegion11) You'll find out once I've finished my story.
  34. 01,06  2:39a    11(@01Plothole11) Awwww, I have to be patient.
  35. 01,06  2:39a    11(@01Plothole11) Not my strong suite.
  36. 0101,06  2:39a    11(@01AridLegion11) But the best among them were pertty much Godlike.
  37. 0101,06  2:39a    11(@01AridLegion11) SO much so that they actually became gods.
  38. 0101,06  2:40a    11(@01AridLegion11) But yeah.
  39. 0101,06  2:40a    11(@01AridLegion11) Where was I?
  40. 0101,06  2:40a    11(@01AridLegion11) Right, so the warp.
  41. 0101,06  2:40a    11(@01AridLegion11) Eventually tears began to..
  42. 0101,06  2:40a    11(@01AridLegion11) Happen.
  43. 0101,06  2:40a    11(@01AridLegion11) In the warp.
  44. 0101,06  2:40a    11(@01AridLegion11) And then, magic.
  45. 0101,06  2:40a    11(@01AridLegion11) Which the Los discovered.
  46. 0101,06  2:40a    11(@01AridLegion11) And then, profit.
  47. 0101,06  2:41a    11(@01AridLegion11) And then the Los decided to create other species.
  48. 01,06  2:41a    11(@01Plothole11) What type of magic? HP magic?
  49. 0101,06  2:41a    11(@01AridLegion11) Just magic.
  50. 0101,06  2:41a    11(@01AridLegion11) Pure, and unbound.
  51. 01,06  2:41a    11(@01Plothole11) ...
  52. 0101,06  2:41a    11(@01AridLegion11) It's complicated.
  53. 0101,06  2:41a    11(@01AridLegion11) Magic is just that.
  54. 01,06  2:41a    11(@01Plothole11) Oh, that actaully makes sense though to me.
  55. 0101,06  2:41a    11(@01AridLegion11) Fucking magic.
  56. 1  2:41a    11(@01AridLegion11) Fucking magic.
  57. 0101,06  2:42a    11(@01AridLegion11) But diffenent cultures have different ways of harnessing and using it.
  58. 0101,06  2:42a    11(@01AridLegion11) You get?
  59. 01,06  2:42a    11(@01Plothole11) Yeah/
  60. 01,06  2:42a    11(@01Plothole11) *.
  61. 0101,06  2:42a    11(@01AridLegion11) Right.
  62. 0101,06  2:43a    11(@01AridLegion11) So then the Los started creating other races.
  63. 0101,06  2:43a    11(@01AridLegion11) Dragons, Dwarves, Vampires, stuff like that.
  64. 0101,06  2:43a    11(@01AridLegion11) Did I mention that God had created Fairies?
  65. 0101,06  2:44a    11(@01AridLegion11) Cause thats important.
  66. 01,06  2:44a    11(@01Plothole11) Which God?
  67. 0101,06  2:44a    11(@01AridLegion11) White God.
  68. 0101,06  2:44a    11(@01AridLegion11) The God of the universe this takes place in.
  69. 01,06  2:44a    11(@01Plothole11) K
  70. 0101,06  2:44a    11(@01AridLegion11) Right, so.
  71. 0101,06  2:45a    11(@01AridLegion11) Eventually a Los name Sammarind decided that he was going to create the ulitmate race.
  72. 0101,06  2:45a    11(@01AridLegion11) And he did.
  73. 01,06  2:45a    11(@01Plothole11) Hilter.
  74. 01,06  2:45a    11(@01Plothole11) ...
  75. 0101,06  2:45a    11(@01AridLegion11) With the blood of a demon a Los and a Fae
  76. 0101,06  2:46a    11(@01AridLegion11) He created the first Aran.
  77. 0101,06  2:46a    11(@01AridLegion11) The first Star Fae.
  78. 0101,06  2:46a    11(@01AridLegion11) And he named him Arcathan.
  79. 01,06  2:46a    11(@01Plothole11) How are you going to introduce all of this into the story?
  80. 0101,06  2:47a    11(@01AridLegion11) Spoilers?
  81. 01,06  2:47a    11(@01Plothole11) You just don't want to make it Miranda Flairgold AU.
  82. 01,06  2:47a    11(@01Plothole11) That won't go over well.
  83. 0101,06  2:47a    11(@01AridLegion11) No, I mean do you want spoilers?
  84. 1,6  2:48a    11(@01Plothole11) Sure.
  85. 0101,06  2:48a    11(@01AridLegion11) Haryy's gonna died for a few minutes in '
  86. 0101,06  2:49a    11(@01AridLegion11) '96.
  87. 01,06  2:49a    11(@01Plothole11) How old is he in 96?
  88. 0101,06  2:49a    11(@01AridLegion11) And then he's gonna discover all this backstory.
  89. 0101,06  2:49a    11(@01AridLegion11) 15.
  90. 0101,06  2:49a    11(@01AridLegion11) Fifith year.
  91. 01,06  2:49a    11(@01Plothole11) How does he survive in the Basalisk fight then?
  92. 0101,06  2:49a    11(@01AridLegion11) Fifth*
  93. 0101,06  2:49a    11(@01AridLegion11) Ritual.
  94. 0101,06  2:50a    11(@01AridLegion11) And then the Voldemort ritual./
  95. 0101,06  2:50a        11• 12•  0101 join: Omniscientone 12(11Omniscient@coldfront-2DAF061B.dhcp.mtgm.al.charter.com12)
  96. 0101,06  2:50a        11• 12•  0101 mode: ChanServ 12(11services@coldfront.net12) 01set: +o Omniscientone
  97. 0101,06  2:50a    11(@01AridLegion11) Blood of the enemy and stuff.
  98. 01,06  2:50a    11(@01Plothole11) Alright.
  99. 0101,06  2:51a    11(@01AridLegion11) Right, so Arcathan married, or the equivalent, a Los named Diana and had two children.
  100. 0101,06  2:51a    11(@01AridLegion11) The older one he named Jyhin and the younger one he named Rayan.
  101. 0101,06  2:52a    11(@01AridLegion11) Then, thousands of years past and eventually the White God left to go fap or something.
  102. 01,06  2:52a    11(@01Plothole11) ...
  103. 01,06  2:52a    11(@01Plothole11) :D
  104. 0101,06  2:52a    11(@01AridLegion11) And a war broke out.
  105. 0101,06  2:53a    11(@01AridLegion11) At first it was between the Arans and the Los.
  106. 0101,06  2:53a    11(@01AridLegion11) But then Jyhin(Veran) killed Diana and the war split into three sides.
  107. 01,06  2:53a    11(@01Plothole11) He killed his mother?
  108. 0101,06  2:53a    11(@01AridLegion11) So before the war, there was this thing called the Artiri Gemaer.
  109. 0101,06  2:53a    11(@01AridLegion11) Yep.
  110. 0101,06  2:54a    11(@01AridLegion11) And raped her.
  111. 1  2:54a    11(@01AridLegion11) Maybe.
  112. 0101,06  2:54a    11(@01AridLegion11) Not sure yet.
  113. 01,06  2:54a    11(@01Plothole11) Alright.
  114. 0101,06  2:54a    11(@01AridLegion11) So this Artiri Gemaer was like a mages guild with all the most powerful mages in it.
  115. 0101,06  2:55a    11(@01AridLegion11) There were ten-thousand at the begining of the Ever War(called that beacuse it lasted for 5fucking-thousand years).
  116. 0101,06  2:55a    11(@01AridLegion11) By the end there were...
  117. 0101,06  2:55a    11(@01AridLegion11) 13 or somthing,
  118. 0101,06  2:55a    11(@01AridLegion11) And anyway
  119. 01,06  2:55a    11(@01Plothole11) They were like the Jedi then sorta.
  120. 0101,06  2:56a    11(@01AridLegion11) Yeah.
  121. 0101,06  2:56a    11(@01AridLegion11) Pretty much.
  122. 0101,06  2:56a    11(@01AridLegion11) Anyway
  123. 0101,06  2:56a    11(@01AridLegion11) Arcathan Killed Rayan.
  124. 0101,06  2:56a    11(@01AridLegion11) Jyhin killed Sammarind, Blaydur and Arcathan.
  125. 0101,06  2:56a    11(@01AridLegion11) Wait.
  126. 0101,06  2:57a    11(@01AridLegion11) Arcathan killed Jyhin first.
  127. 01,06  2:57a    11(@01Plothole11) Why did Arcathan kill him? Shouldn't he try and kill Veran.
  128. 01,06  2:57a    11(@01Plothole11) Nevermind.
  129. 0101,06  2:57a    11(@01AridLegion11) Rayan was on Jyhins side.
  130. 0101,06  2:57a    11(@01AridLegion11) No one but Arcathan and Jyhin knew Jyhin had killed Diana.
  131. 0101,06  2:58a    11(@01AridLegion11) Rayan thought it was Arcathan.
  132. 01,06  2:58a    11(@01Plothole11) K
  133. 0101,06  2:58a    11(@01AridLegion11) And then Jyhin did some stuff I'll go into later to posses a guy named William Black.
  134. 0101,06  2:59a    11(@01AridLegion11) And then he killed Arcathan.
  135. 0101,06  2:59a    11(@01AridLegion11) And then..
  136. 0101,06  2:59a    11(@01AridLegion11) Filler.
  137. 1,6  2:59a    11(@01Plothole11) Filler?
  138. 0101,06  2:59a    11(@01AridLegion11) And then William Black's body died.
  139. 0101,06  3:00a    11(@01AridLegion11) And Jyhin possesed someone else.
  140. 0101,06  3:00a    11(@01AridLegion11) And he died.
  141. 01,06  3:00a    11(@01Plothole11) Oh, so on and so forth.
  142. 0101,06  3:00a    11(@01AridLegion11) And so one untill Harry is the one to be possesed next.
  143. 0101,06  3:00a    11(@01AridLegion11) Thing is.
  144. 0101,06  3:00a    11(@01AridLegion11) He has untill he's 32 to live his life till Jyhin/Veran posseses him.
  145. 0101,06  3:01a    11(@01AridLegion11) So yeah.
  146. 01,06  3:01a    11(@01Plothole11) You want to hear my initial thoughts?
  147. 0101,06  3:01a    11(@01AridLegion11) Sure.
  148. 0101,06  3:01a    11(@01AridLegion11) Is it WTF?
  149. 01,06  3:01a    11(@01Plothole11) This is very fucking complicated.
  150. 0101,06  3:01a    11(@01AridLegion11) I did tell you that.
  151. 01,06  3:02a    11(@01Plothole11) I can't think of any way to pull it off without devoting like one or two chapters too an infodump.
  152. 0101,06  3:02a    11(@01AridLegion11) I've been working on this since 08 man.
  153. 0101,06  3:02a    11(@01AridLegion11) I'm good with info dumps though.
  154. 0101,06  3:02a    11(@01AridLegion11) Trust me.
  155. 0101,06  3:02a    11(@01AridLegion11) I make them awesome
  156. 0101,06  3:02a    11(@01AridLegion11) I can put an info dump into an action scene and make them work.
  157. 0101,06  3:03a    11(@01AridLegion11) I thinl\k.
  158. 01,06  3:03a    11(@01Plothole11) Well, if you think so.
  159. 0101,06  3:03a    11(@01AridLegion11) And if not
  160. 0101,06  3:03a    11(@01AridLegion11) I'll just have to find a way to do it.
  161. 0101,06  3:03a    11(@01AridLegion11) And I will.
  162. 1,6  3:04a    11(@01Plothole11) Personally, I think it would just be a lot simpler if you took out all of that information and just give the general backround of where Veran came from/
  163. 0101,06  3:04a    11(@01AridLegion11) Yeah.
  164. 0101,06  3:04a    11(@01AridLegion11) Maybe put the rest into an omake series.
  165. 0101,06  3:04a    11(@01AridLegion11) OR a spinoff.
  166. 01,06  3:04a    11(@01Plothole11) That could work.
  167. 0101,06  3:04a    11(@01AridLegion11) Or something.
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