xDraghun

BiloCraft Plot Review

Jul 17th, 2015
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  1. Hello BiloCraft!!!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today.
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  5. I'm going to make this review plain and simple for you. To rank up, your would need three major parts which are organics, structure, and terrain. So far your have a structure with no depth, detail or shape, your trees are default which is a giant thumbs down on this server, and your basically have no terrain except bonemealed grass and few really smalls hills. Honestly, I would like you to start your plot all over. Work on building your structures with more detail and depth and try not to use the same/one blocks. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial if needed. Also try to give your structure shape because it's basically a box with a youtube logo on the top. For your trees, make sure they're custom with branches, roots, and air holes so they look realistic and settling. For your terrain, work on building small mountains or at list bigger hills. Don't stick with just regular grass blocks and add variation by adding cobblestone, gravel, podzol, or any block that matches your palette.
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  7. I have concluded that this plot is far from being ranked up. Good Luck and I hope you put more effort on to your next submission. :D
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