Tayter_Kat

lokapoka

Jun 25th, 2015
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  1. Hello lokapoka, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Building:
  4. structures are anything from towers to houses to stalls. Your house in the middle is much better from last time, but it is lacking depth and detail. Depth is the layers within a build, by which you can add more by adding trap doors, stairs, slabs, fences, and buttons. This will give a build more depth and make it more realistic.
  5. Organics:
  6. Organics are anything living, like trees and flowers. Your trees need a bit of work though. The trunk is a bit to thick for the rest of the tree, and the branches are not to pretty. If you make the trunk a bit smaller and make the branches look like branches, they would look amazing.
  7. Terrain:
  8. Terrain is the ground our avatars walk on plus caves, cliffs, and craters. Your terrains is very good for an initiate, so I applaud you for that.
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  10. Good Luck!<3
  11. -Tayter_Kat
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