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- Wish's BHA4 Judging - Unworldly Manifestations
- -=Kirbio's Entry=-
- Rubric:
- -20 points per pattern - 10 points to creativity and pattern aesthetics, 10 points to fun factor and pattern design.
- -30 points towards general aesthetics, sound, and polish. (For the record, *average* aesthetics is essentially the defaults per engine, and is at around a 6/10 per category)
- -(Usual contest-specific bonuses will be omitted due to contest theme being OCs lol)
- At the end, the total points will be divided by the total possible points, and then multiplied by <contest average> to get your final score.
- Fair warning: I personally feel much better about several of these attacks, but I'm actively trying to not be blinded by bias :sweat_smile:
- Nonspell 1: 12.5/20
- LINE PIECE!!
- Honestly not a crazy non altogether, but it's serviceable for the first non.
- I like how the I pieces explode though.
- 6.5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 6/10 - Fun/Design
- Glitch Sign "Illusionary Blockage": 17.5/20
- I can't play this card without giggling at it, it's hysterical
- Dodging it is reasonably fair, not overwhelming, but not too much either as long as you use the focus button sometimes.
- Yeah sorry I'm gonna have to take off the "no bias" cap for this one, it's too funny. Perfect Creativity score.
- 10/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 7.5/10 - Fun/Design
- Nonspell 2: 14.5/20
- Once again pretty basic, but I like dodging it much better than the first non.
- 6.5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 8/10 - Fun/Design
- Hologram "Imaginary Weapon with No Name": 15/20
- Really cool flair, slow and methodical (and also slightly boring) dodging
- 9/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 6/10 - Fun/Design
- Nonspell 3: 15.5/20
- Definitely the most unique non so far with the toughest dodging too.
- 7.5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 8/10 - Fun/Design
- Cognitohazard "Information Overload": 17/20
- Haha funny Deltarune reference, but honestly it is genuinely more interesting to dodge than the original.
- The little green bits are crazy threatening and it forces you to move around quite a bit.
- 8/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 9/10 - Fun/Design
- Nonspell 4: 17.5/20
- Creative use of the O piece (that doesn't look like an O due to Tetris but you brought it full circle) but not very impactful lol
- This feels like Stage 3-Water of GoDS with the orb section replaced with T pieces but that's just fine
- Your stages tend to feel like bosses...which they really shouldn't but that's a discussion for another day. Nevertheless good
- 8.5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 9/10 - Fun/Design
- Fear "Claustrophobic Invaders": 18/20
- I love the glowy bullets that use the same effect as the Space Invaders and this whole spell honestly looks fantastic
- Dodging it has me move around decently and is quite fun!
- 9/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 9/10 - Fun/Design
- wake up.
- Anyway, the ULTIMATE SUPER CARD has been omitted, it's going to be impossible to judge. Don't worry however, I'll be mentioning it in the aesthetic section.
- AESTHETIC: 30/30
- This section is going to be incredibly personal to me, and thusly I'm going to give a perfect aesthetic score here.
- There's a problem with judging this script "objectively" and in context of a danmaku attack and not an experience - this script is *so* magical.
- For me, in particular, this is a script literally featuring a bunch of my friends. I can't *not* gush about it a little.
- Miransu's "last hurrah" of a Fox Fire arrange is something I hum literally every time I play it and the sound effects are well chosen.
- The aesthetics are really good in general and I think that goes without saying. The polish on this script is even higher than usual for TAE internal stuff.
- The card system is practically ripped from LCM and that is 100% fine because it works amazingly. You even have Berserker Soul at the end with an absurdly insane finale.
- Let's see if we can sum up all of them in one word:
- GCP: EVAC!!
- Mana: LMAO
- Robin: bnuuy
- Gilde: MegamanOmega
- Tokiko: birb
- KSK: fiery
- Python: mitsuru?
- Lunarethic: circle
- Meowstic: catto
- EDIT: AAAAA THIS ISN'T NEARLY ALL OF THEM SKJGBNSKLGN I JUST WENT BACK TO MY VOD I'M SORRY.......
- Yeah never mind that was more boring than I expected.
- ANYWAY y'all this script goes down as one of my favorites, maybe not for its overall objective quality, but for the STRONG impression it immediately left on my mind
- And the thing is, it IS really good!! It's not exactly easy to judge patterns in a vacuum so I'm sure I under or over scored some patterns throughout the process, and this goes for any script.
- Anyway I loved it.
- SUM OF PATTERNS: 127.5/160
- AESTHETIC: 30/30
- TOTAL: 157.5/190 * 25 = 20.72/25
- See the Aesthetic section.
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