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- Novice Review:
- Hey there! Good start on a plot, but theres some stuff you should work on :)
- The structure is decent, okay depth and decent detail, but the way its done needs a bit of work. Instead of using slabs for the roof, try using full blocks and keep the slabs and stairs for detailing. The cobblestone bit at the front doesnt really go with the rest of the roof, so try to keep that in mind when doing things like that.
- The small gazebo needs to be a bit bigger also. It seems a bit weak right now, so try and buff it up a bit and give it some detail as well. More structure on the plot is recommended.
- Your tree is decent, but try to make it a bit more fluid. More realistic. Keep the branches to the top of the tree. Adding more trees around the plot is a good idea too to break up the empty spaces.
- The terrain is a bit choppy and theres not many levels of it, so try and make the terrain higher to give the plot more variation.
- Hope this helps! Good luck!
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