2014-11-20 Workshop: childhood story corrections

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If the story is about the past, the verbs should be in the past tense.

can -> could
At that time I couldn't drive because I was too young.

will -> would
I wanted to be a doctor because I would help people.
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We wanted to do some activities.
We wanted to make some things. (= create, build, cook)
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I couldn't go out and I couldn't talk with my friends.

I couldn't go out or talk with my friends.
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I visited them on my birthday. (it was the same date)
I visited them for my birthday. (it was how I celebrated)

at noon, at 2:00, at dawn

in this moment -> at this moment -> at this time (or "now")
in that moment -> at that moment -> at that time (or "then")
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I couldn't be a doctor because I never liked science.
"science" in general = all science -> no "the"

* I wanted to be a doctor for help the people.
-> I wanted to be a doctor to help people.

 to + verb
for + noun