Tayter_Kat

SlimeHelperHuy

Aug 16th, 2015
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  1. Hello SlimeHelperHuy, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. you have some structures, but they do not have good depth at all. Depth is the layers within a structure. you can add depth by incorporating slabs, stairs, buttons , fences, and trap doors. I recommend visiting /warp depthtutorial to get a better understanding of depth.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have some trees, but they are very bland. First off, I recommend adding branches to our trees so you can add more leaves to it. When adding the leaves, make sure they are not in a specific shape, like a sphere. The leaves do not have to be attached to just the branches, but they can float one or two blocks away from it depending on how large your tree is. lastly, make sure the whole tree is proportional, and not one part of it is larger than the other. make it smooth.
  7. terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. You have some terrain, but other parts of it is very flat. I recommend adding some more hills, craters, cliffs, etc. to your plot to make it more realistic.
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  10. Fix the things mentioned above and you'll do great! Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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