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Otona Summer nano Desu! [Typeset]

Aug 15th, 2015
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  1. Otona Summer nano Desu! Translation
  2. From http://exhentai.org/g/842648/2c886dc6a6/
  3.  
  4. [Preface]
  5. >[Hi everyone, I'm Eretto. I've recently managed to regain control of my eating habits, and have now slimmed down (good news!)]
  6. >[This time around, let's have a banzai for little girls! Mainly the 6thDesDev! Awesome!! \('w'), I, who had always wanted to draw something like this, wondered: was it a little too late to draw these pure and wonderful children? ...And yet I have successfully assumed duty and sortied! Although the School Swimsuit 6thDesDev were very dazzling, I wanted to let them wear relatively fashionable swimsuits, and so this time around they will not be wearing their school swimsuits. Ahhh~this is a cuteness that presists regardless of what they wear.]
  7. >[This time around, the admiral (who doesn't mind the fact that he appears on the limited edition bigside drink) will be as meddlesome and blabbermouthed as always, I hope everyone will enjoy! (ow<)-*]
  8. >[Now then, let us advance to the comic!]
  9.  
  10. >Let's enjoy ourselves on the beach today~
  11. >You're too loud, Ikazuchi [ahhh, really no--]
  12. >[Listen to me] I wore my onee-san swimsuit out today, so let's act a little more mature. >Akatsuki, weren't you ecstatic about being able to wear this swimsuit?
  13. >W-wh?! Not at all!
  14. >Everyone's here!!
  15. >Ah
  16.  
  17. >Good morning, commander!
  18. >[Assuming][Duty]
  19. >Good morning!!
  20. >Ah, everyone's wearing their new swimsuits today.
  21. >[Yes] Yes!
  22. >Using the 7thDesDiv's swimsuit poses as reference, Hibiki and company spent some time designing our swimsuits.
  23. >...how do you feel about it?
  24. >Extremely dissatisfied! The 600thDesDiv is too stiff!
  25. >The 600thDesDiv?!
  26.  
  27. >Well, to be honest everyone's swimsuits are quite fitting.
  28. >[hmhmhm....~]
  29. >[of course]
  30. >[khorosho]
  31. >[That's great <3]
  32. >Actually, I had something I'd like everyone to do.
  33. >Something you want us to do? [six]
  34. >Before that, however, I have a dear friend of mine I would like to introduce.
  35. >He took off his hat...!!
  36. >Is this some kind of super well-connected guy?
  37. >Gallery Bug-chan!!
  38. >Uwahhhohhh?! [unexpected]
  39.  
  40. >Until now, he has never crawled out of the Naval District book collection; he says he hopes he could play around on the beach for once!!
  41. >[Pleased to meet everyone!]
  42. >And so, everyone....could you play with him for today?
  43. >What, something that easy? [right?]
  44. >Yes!
  45. >A real lady is not stingy with lending her aid >[thumbs-up (mm!)]
  46. >Thank you everyone....
  47. >Also, this bug....has something I've always wanted to experience...
  48.  
  49. >[uwahh--just like a person]
  50. >So you "really wanted to have a human body," huh~ This way you can have some wonderful memories!
  51. >This body seems a little superealistic.....
  52. >[\\Thank you, please take a picture for me//]
  53. >You seem like you're really enjoying it....
  54. >Absolutely! This photo will be this bug's lifelong treasure!
  55. >W-what is this shaking?!
  56.  
  57. >T-this is...!
  58. >Mr. Bug...has become a person?
  59. >[\\Ara, so cool!//]
  60. >Hawawawa--a huge starfish emerged from the sands~~~!!!
  61. >[Wow....] I can even move on my own....
  62. >With this, I might be able to play with everyone!
  63. >The shocking thing is that he learned how to control it~~~!!
  64. >It's a rare opportunity, don't let it go!
  65. >[What manner of contraption is that...]
  66. >[uraaaaa!]
  67. >[Is this really alright?]
  68. >Hurry over and play with Ikazuchi and company!
  69. >Yes!
  70.  
  71. >[sanshiki]
  72. >Mmm....arehh/ehh...?
  73. >What is it?
  74. >Ah, nothing...it's just that this body seems a little hard to move....
  75. >I'm a little worried...
  76.  
  77. >Right, I, too am ready to go!!
  78. >I, the Admiral, can depart at any time!!
  79. >Hmmm...?
  80. >That is...!
  81. >[Ah!] Commander, this is bad!
  82. >All you little onee-sans, come and play with Starfish~~
  83. >A giant starfish is rampaging~~!!
  84.  
  85. >After sapping the strength of those it touches, that starfish latches (note: can also be read as tie up, grope or pester) onto peope--
  86. >"The Starfish that Binds others with its body! (note: there has to be a better way to phrase this)"
  87. >What the hell, that's disgusting!
  88. >Uwahh--it's a child~come and play with starfish...
  89. >[Really now!] I'm not a child, I'm a mautre lady!!
  90. >S-sorry >This bug did not understand that Starfish....I'm really sorry....
  91. >[It's fine...] >Mr. Bug, this isn't Mr. Bug's fault >What is that in the sky...!
  92.  
  93. >[Don't you dare touch my little ladies!]
  94. >Commander?! Is he gaining air supremacy by breathing out and using his snorkel as a jet?!
  95. >[Wh-]You wanna fight?!
  96. >I'll hug you to death!!
  97.  
  98. >Pardon me--
  99. >But is there a breathing apparatus nearby...?!
  100. >Ehhhhhhh--?!
  101. >[There's an emergency aid center enarby....]
  102. >[Thank you!]
  103. >The name of "the undying phoenix" is no lie!
  104. >It's clearly a lie!
  105.  
  106. >Everyone...this time around, I've really caused a lot of trouble for everyone. I'm incredibly grateful for everyone's assistance [This bug had a lot of fun!]
  107. >[oxygen]
  108. >This time around I failed to do an Admiral's duty! I'm incredibly sorry...!
  109. >No....what you did went way beyond an Admiral's normal duties.
  110. >Also, I'm really thankful that everyone worked together to fulfill Bug-chan's dream of many years.
  111.  
  112. >I should also mention that Starfish-kun returned to the sea after making sure I was alright.
  113. >[Really...] burning out my expositionary shock value like that....
  114. >Goodbye, inhuman one! (note: "没人星" is a pun with "没人性" - inhuman, and the "星" is part of the chinese word from starfish. It may be a pun joke in japanese. The uploader will probably put up the raw version soon anyway, so you may want to check.)
  115. >Even in the end he said something cool!!
  116. >Akatsuki, Ikazuchi
  117. >Inazuma, Hibiki
  118.  
  119. >From here on, too, I'll be relying on your help!
  120. >The next day--Naval District Book Gallery
  121. >[Although it's a photo full of memories, why do I still get the feeling that it looks like a punishment game...]
  122.  
  123. [The End]
  124. >I wonder if that fellow has replenished his oxygen yet--
  125.  
  126. >[Next up is the sketch section--!]
  127. >[First up is the sketch of the cover. This is the result of a few redraws! I really regret covering Akatsuki's lower half...! (^p^)]
  128. >[I tried drawing all kinds of swimsuits. Akatsuki's mature type, Ikazuchi's in minishorts, Inazuma in her gentle cuteness, Hibiki 's skirt-type white school swimsuit!]
  129. >[Determining the location of the "III" decoration was incredibly important!]
  130. >On the lower right is the original sketch of the 6thDesDiv swimsuit. Since Inazuma is my naval district's oldest secretary ship, I took extra thought and care in drawing her.]
  131.  
  132. >[The Takanami I drew on Niconico. What's with this child, both her CG and voice are absolutely adorable, such that I definitely had to get her!! And so I drew her.]
  133. >[Her rainy season CG had its own super cutness. Making the little proud one ("傲慢,"don't know who, it appears in the next page. Goumann-chan?) into a teru teru bozu suprisingly didn't arouse any sense of loss....!]
  134. >[Cosplay in the Kagerou-class uniform. no matter what, spats are just the best! \('w'),]
  135. >[--> Cosplay of Shimakaze, Cosplay of Yuu-chan. No matter how you look at it, she's super cute!! I really hope they make an official christmas spriate--! (:3Jj\")Jj]
  136.  
  137. (note: everything after this is translated with as little work as possible, i.e. shoddily. Because i don't give a shit about the sketches)
  138.  
  139. >[This time around I was tasked with drawing a color illustration for bigsige. And so on this page I've made a few original character drawins! I hope everyone gets a cool feeling!]
  140. >On the upper right, I wanted to draw an illustration for a bottled water box. So I tried it. "Whole boxes are the best!" That this picture was chosen gave me a bit of a shock ww]
  141. >[A new picture of the little proud one/goumann-chan in a mug. She's been warmed int oa daze!]
  142.  
  143. >[A sketch of the endcard for the 8th episode of the anime Etotama, done in collaboration with Natsume Erika-sensei!]
  144. >[<--originally, the plan was quite good. However, upon drawing Nyaa-tan and Uma-tan, I went a little crazy.]
  145. >[<--I tried adding on a "happy eating" catchphrase and then putting them like fries into a container...]
  146. >[Then I tried having them grimly clutching their own tails. nom nom....gnaw gnaw....chewing like that.]
  147. >[-->Then I tried letting nya-tan watching a gloriously galloping Uma-tan as they frolicked on the ground. God damn....(note: literally "takuuu")]
  148. >[In the end, the approved sketch is below. May you viewers verify!]
  149.  
  150. >[A sketch I made during last year's E-2. This is a first sketch. It was meant to convey the look of a girl who just returned in the rain.]
  151. >A summer sketch made during E-2. It aims to convey a feeling of summer!]
  152.  
  153. >[<--a sketch of a bathroom scene.]
  154. >[WHen I draw this kind of picture, I feel like there are many ways to liven up a bath!]
  155. >[Below is a quick sketch. This provides a simplistic but regal atmosphere, I like it!]
  156. >Lastly, sleeping on the table~Hibiki! I do want to draw images of uniforms more!]
  157. >[Afterwards, suddenly an egg to disturb the sleep.]
  158.  
  159. >[What did everyone feel about the 6thDesDev doujin? I feel that since there were too many characters that the 4 main female leads became supplementary characters...! _(:3 JL)_ In order to ensure that all four would definitely appear in a significant capacity, I did all i could...! If I want a story in which each character was their own main character i'd still have to do a lot more research into their characters. As such, I'll challenge that the next chance I can get! (`owo')]
  160. >[When I draw this kind of funny doujin, in order to prevent myself from fucking around too much I'll inadvertently advance the story very quickly. But if I let the doujin naturally develop with the story, the humor would probably decrease. It's very hard to fix that feeling of convenience. I have to keep on working to write a story that is neither abrupt nor boring and improve myself!]
  161. >[Although i still want to draw some shipgirl summer characters, it simply cannot be done! After comiket I hope i'll be able to draw some!]
  162. >[And so, thank you everyone for reading up to this point--!]
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