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- Otona Summer nano Desu! Translation
- From http://exhentai.org/g/842648/2c886dc6a6/
- [Preface]
- >[Hi everyone, I'm Eretto. I've recently managed to regain control of my eating habits, and have now slimmed down (good news!)]
- >[This time around, let's have a banzai for little girls! Mainly the 6thDesDev! Awesome!! \('w'), I, who had always wanted to draw something like this, wondered: was it a little too late to draw these pure and wonderful children? ...And yet I have successfully assumed duty and sortied! Although the School Swimsuit 6thDesDev were very dazzling, I wanted to let them wear relatively fashionable swimsuits, and so this time around they will not be wearing their school swimsuits. Ahhh~this is a cuteness that presists regardless of what they wear.]
- >[This time around, the admiral (who doesn't mind the fact that he appears on the limited edition bigside drink) will be as meddlesome and blabbermouthed as always, I hope everyone will enjoy! (ow<)-*]
- >[Now then, let us advance to the comic!]
- >Let's enjoy ourselves on the beach today~
- >You're too loud, Ikazuchi [ahhh, really no--]
- >[Listen to me] I wore my onee-san swimsuit out today, so let's act a little more mature. >Akatsuki, weren't you ecstatic about being able to wear this swimsuit?
- >W-wh?! Not at all!
- >Everyone's here!!
- >Ah
- >Good morning, commander!
- >[Assuming][Duty]
- >Good morning!!
- >Ah, everyone's wearing their new swimsuits today.
- >[Yes] Yes!
- >Using the 7thDesDiv's swimsuit poses as reference, Hibiki and company spent some time designing our swimsuits.
- >...how do you feel about it?
- >Extremely dissatisfied! The 600thDesDiv is too stiff!
- >The 600thDesDiv?!
- >Well, to be honest everyone's swimsuits are quite fitting.
- >[hmhmhm....~]
- >[of course]
- >[khorosho]
- >[That's great <3]
- >Actually, I had something I'd like everyone to do.
- >Something you want us to do? [six]
- >Before that, however, I have a dear friend of mine I would like to introduce.
- >He took off his hat...!!
- >Is this some kind of super well-connected guy?
- >Gallery Bug-chan!!
- >Uwahhhohhh?! [unexpected]
- >Until now, he has never crawled out of the Naval District book collection; he says he hopes he could play around on the beach for once!!
- >[Pleased to meet everyone!]
- >And so, everyone....could you play with him for today?
- >What, something that easy? [right?]
- >Yes!
- >A real lady is not stingy with lending her aid >[thumbs-up (mm!)]
- >Thank you everyone....
- >Also, this bug....has something I've always wanted to experience...
- >[uwahh--just like a person]
- >So you "really wanted to have a human body," huh~ This way you can have some wonderful memories!
- >This body seems a little superealistic.....
- >[\\Thank you, please take a picture for me//]
- >You seem like you're really enjoying it....
- >Absolutely! This photo will be this bug's lifelong treasure!
- >W-what is this shaking?!
- >T-this is...!
- >Mr. Bug...has become a person?
- >[\\Ara, so cool!//]
- >Hawawawa--a huge starfish emerged from the sands~~~!!!
- >[Wow....] I can even move on my own....
- >With this, I might be able to play with everyone!
- >The shocking thing is that he learned how to control it~~~!!
- >It's a rare opportunity, don't let it go!
- >[What manner of contraption is that...]
- >[uraaaaa!]
- >[Is this really alright?]
- >Hurry over and play with Ikazuchi and company!
- >Yes!
- >[sanshiki]
- >Mmm....arehh/ehh...?
- >What is it?
- >Ah, nothing...it's just that this body seems a little hard to move....
- >I'm a little worried...
- >Right, I, too am ready to go!!
- >I, the Admiral, can depart at any time!!
- >Hmmm...?
- >That is...!
- >[Ah!] Commander, this is bad!
- >All you little onee-sans, come and play with Starfish~~
- >A giant starfish is rampaging~~!!
- >After sapping the strength of those it touches, that starfish latches (note: can also be read as tie up, grope or pester) onto peope--
- >"The Starfish that Binds others with its body! (note: there has to be a better way to phrase this)"
- >What the hell, that's disgusting!
- >Uwahh--it's a child~come and play with starfish...
- >[Really now!] I'm not a child, I'm a mautre lady!!
- >S-sorry >This bug did not understand that Starfish....I'm really sorry....
- >[It's fine...] >Mr. Bug, this isn't Mr. Bug's fault >What is that in the sky...!
- >[Don't you dare touch my little ladies!]
- >Commander?! Is he gaining air supremacy by breathing out and using his snorkel as a jet?!
- >[Wh-]You wanna fight?!
- >I'll hug you to death!!
- >Pardon me--
- >But is there a breathing apparatus nearby...?!
- >Ehhhhhhh--?!
- >[There's an emergency aid center enarby....]
- >[Thank you!]
- >The name of "the undying phoenix" is no lie!
- >It's clearly a lie!
- >Everyone...this time around, I've really caused a lot of trouble for everyone. I'm incredibly grateful for everyone's assistance [This bug had a lot of fun!]
- >[oxygen]
- >This time around I failed to do an Admiral's duty! I'm incredibly sorry...!
- >No....what you did went way beyond an Admiral's normal duties.
- >Also, I'm really thankful that everyone worked together to fulfill Bug-chan's dream of many years.
- >I should also mention that Starfish-kun returned to the sea after making sure I was alright.
- >[Really...] burning out my expositionary shock value like that....
- >Goodbye, inhuman one! (note: "没人星" is a pun with "没人性" - inhuman, and the "星" is part of the chinese word from starfish. It may be a pun joke in japanese. The uploader will probably put up the raw version soon anyway, so you may want to check.)
- >Even in the end he said something cool!!
- >Akatsuki, Ikazuchi
- >Inazuma, Hibiki
- >From here on, too, I'll be relying on your help!
- >The next day--Naval District Book Gallery
- >[Although it's a photo full of memories, why do I still get the feeling that it looks like a punishment game...]
- [The End]
- >I wonder if that fellow has replenished his oxygen yet--
- >[Next up is the sketch section--!]
- >[First up is the sketch of the cover. This is the result of a few redraws! I really regret covering Akatsuki's lower half...! (^p^)]
- >[I tried drawing all kinds of swimsuits. Akatsuki's mature type, Ikazuchi's in minishorts, Inazuma in her gentle cuteness, Hibiki 's skirt-type white school swimsuit!]
- >[Determining the location of the "III" decoration was incredibly important!]
- >On the lower right is the original sketch of the 6thDesDiv swimsuit. Since Inazuma is my naval district's oldest secretary ship, I took extra thought and care in drawing her.]
- >[The Takanami I drew on Niconico. What's with this child, both her CG and voice are absolutely adorable, such that I definitely had to get her!! And so I drew her.]
- >[Her rainy season CG had its own super cutness. Making the little proud one ("傲慢,"don't know who, it appears in the next page. Goumann-chan?) into a teru teru bozu suprisingly didn't arouse any sense of loss....!]
- >[Cosplay in the Kagerou-class uniform. no matter what, spats are just the best! \('w'),]
- >[--> Cosplay of Shimakaze, Cosplay of Yuu-chan. No matter how you look at it, she's super cute!! I really hope they make an official christmas spriate--! (:3Jj\")Jj]
- (note: everything after this is translated with as little work as possible, i.e. shoddily. Because i don't give a shit about the sketches)
- >[This time around I was tasked with drawing a color illustration for bigsige. And so on this page I've made a few original character drawins! I hope everyone gets a cool feeling!]
- >On the upper right, I wanted to draw an illustration for a bottled water box. So I tried it. "Whole boxes are the best!" That this picture was chosen gave me a bit of a shock ww]
- >[A new picture of the little proud one/goumann-chan in a mug. She's been warmed int oa daze!]
- >[A sketch of the endcard for the 8th episode of the anime Etotama, done in collaboration with Natsume Erika-sensei!]
- >[<--originally, the plan was quite good. However, upon drawing Nyaa-tan and Uma-tan, I went a little crazy.]
- >[<--I tried adding on a "happy eating" catchphrase and then putting them like fries into a container...]
- >[Then I tried having them grimly clutching their own tails. nom nom....gnaw gnaw....chewing like that.]
- >[-->Then I tried letting nya-tan watching a gloriously galloping Uma-tan as they frolicked on the ground. God damn....(note: literally "takuuu")]
- >[In the end, the approved sketch is below. May you viewers verify!]
- >[A sketch I made during last year's E-2. This is a first sketch. It was meant to convey the look of a girl who just returned in the rain.]
- >A summer sketch made during E-2. It aims to convey a feeling of summer!]
- >[<--a sketch of a bathroom scene.]
- >[WHen I draw this kind of picture, I feel like there are many ways to liven up a bath!]
- >[Below is a quick sketch. This provides a simplistic but regal atmosphere, I like it!]
- >Lastly, sleeping on the table~Hibiki! I do want to draw images of uniforms more!]
- >[Afterwards, suddenly an egg to disturb the sleep.]
- >[What did everyone feel about the 6thDesDev doujin? I feel that since there were too many characters that the 4 main female leads became supplementary characters...! _(:3 JL)_ In order to ensure that all four would definitely appear in a significant capacity, I did all i could...! If I want a story in which each character was their own main character i'd still have to do a lot more research into their characters. As such, I'll challenge that the next chance I can get! (`owo')]
- >[When I draw this kind of funny doujin, in order to prevent myself from fucking around too much I'll inadvertently advance the story very quickly. But if I let the doujin naturally develop with the story, the humor would probably decrease. It's very hard to fix that feeling of convenience. I have to keep on working to write a story that is neither abrupt nor boring and improve myself!]
- >[Although i still want to draw some shipgirl summer characters, it simply cannot be done! After comiket I hope i'll be able to draw some!]
- >[And so, thank you everyone for reading up to this point--!]
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