Tayter_Kat

Bombora

Jul 14th, 2015
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  1. Hello there Bombora, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your apprentice plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from towers to castles to simple houses. Your huge structure looks great for an apprentice plot. Has good depth at the bottom and the pillars are good as well. The little houses are good, they match the theme you have chosen as well. They are a good size and have good depth as well. Maybe add one or two more in another location to transition from the back to the front. I am only saying this because the houses are mainly in the side or back. Overall, great job with the buildings!!!
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like trees, animals, and flowers. You have some great animals on your plot and they actually look like they are animated. Great job with making the creatures. (my personal favorite is the bird on the water. The plants you have build are really good as well, and obviously fit the theme perfectly. One thing that is on my mind is that you are missing an opportunity to add animals and organics on the sandy areas at the bottom of the cliffs. You can add whatever you would like to make it fit along with the rest of your plot. The reason I say this is because the ground above it so lively and animated and the beach is so dull. Add something to fix this up. Great job, and you'll do greet here!
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. The shapes you have created all around your plot is very unique. It shows off the center structure very well. It is smooth and has some great shaped hills and islands. You have also chosen some good block patterns as the grass and as the rock underneath. One thing that also on my mind is that the water has very little to no depth. If you extend the ground lower to make it more realistic.
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  10. I wish you lots of luck!!!<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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