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Elohemian

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Jun 10th, 2018
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  1. To all the wonderful readers, I must be absolutely honest about the feelings I have about the overall state of this story. While I'm quite satisfied with the current quality (Doesn't mean there isn't room to improve) I can't shake the feeling that the early bits are boring at best and subpar at worst. This comes from almost all the elements, Anon starts with too many advantages and too little room to have an arc, the pacing moves at a glaciar speed, the tone is sometimes all over the place and characters like Cherrywood start as the clear love interest instead of someone who's part of this world, while other major characters like Discord and even Luna and Celestia have very few screentime. Not to say about Eris, who is supposed to be one of Anon's most important friends and isn't even mentioned before her introduction. All of this makes for everything before the chaos carnival, and even parts after it to have a poor flow. The worst part for me is that I know how to improve this and I feel confident that I also have the skills to do it.
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  3. So the current story as it is will basically be restarted into something that takes beats, plot points and characters from the previous version and build something much better with these elements. For all of those who feel dissapointed, I understand your reasoning, but I just can't continue building into what I consider a weak foundation. I hope with all my heart that you will stick with this one, and enjoy what I have in store. Next chapter will be the first of this reboot. So again, I hope you stay tunned.
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  5. Love you guys.
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