Bombora's Apprentice Review

Hey there!

I want to start off by saying this plot is absolutely beautiful! However, as this is an Apprentice plot, the critiques have to be very strong. Therefore, don't feel discouraged by the feedback at all.

Firstly, terrain. Your terrain is gorgeous! Very well designed, with a fitting palette, that suits the theme and all works together very well.
I think the additions of leaves on the terrain do give the plot more atmosphere, however they are the main way you've filled space. I think this could be a little more creative! There are many ways you could add detail to the terrain. You could use wheat, vanilla flowers, melons/pumkpins, reeds etc. I can see you've bonemealed the terrain, so you have the yellow and red flowers in places, but you could make it more interesting by having clumps of flowers? Like how flowers naturally spawn, especially if you're going for the natural theme.
The sand/beach areas terrain is far too flat and plain in comparison to everything else on the plot. It looks like you saves it till last and never came back to it. Or you were going for the 'less is more', which I agree with in this case, but do still think you need a couple more layers (at least) on the beach terrain, and maybe some little details like reeds, or a contrasting coloured block design.

Secondly, organics. I love every single organic on this plot and can't fault any one of them, genuinely. What would be nice, just to fill some of the space in the air above, would be some air organics? Birds, maybe some more bees, maybe some small flies because coot?
I'm loving the theme though! Your proportions are a little off, in terms of the size of the snail in comparison to the swan, but it works on this plot nicely cx

Lastly, structure. Exactly the same as I said for the organics, I can't fault your structure! I love the palette choice as it works super well with the theme of everything being natural and organic. I also love the little towns you have going on. It would be nice to see maybe one more small town? I know the theme and the reason there isn't much structure, however for a creative plot, its an important aspect to see in order to rank. I also think, because the roof is a little lacking on the large structure, that a little more in some places would be nice. Or, instead, you could make the pattern on the roof more interesting, because at the moment, it's quite simplistic in comparison to the rest of the structure. It's lovely, don't get me wrong!

You're very close to being Paramount <3

Good luck!
- Dutty :3