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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. So I absolutely love this plot, every aspect about it - I don't need to go into detail about the various things because there's nothing bad I can say about what you have on this plot already ^.^
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  5. The only bad thing I have to say is that it seems like it's lacking in some areas. The structure in the middle is amazing, and I get the general feel on the entire plot is quite wastelandy. But I feel like there are some areas that need more details; Soulsand in shapes isn't contrasting and detailing enough, imo.
  6. I would suggest more colour, but I feel like that would take away from the colour in the 'centerpiece'. So instead, all I ask for is just a few more things to detail - Block detail, or mushrooms/flowers detail etc - maybe another small house, maybe even some small trees dotted around.
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  8. Good luck!
  9. - Dutty :3
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