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HeyItsElla

_Deetz's spark review!

Oct 21st, 2015
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  1. Hey there _Deetz, I'm HeyItsElla and I'm a Junior mod who will be reviewing you today.
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  3. So, first of all, well done! You show potential and that is a very positive thing.
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  5. To rank up you need to fill three criteria: Terrain, Structure and Organics.
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  7. Terrain- The terrain of a plot is the environment and biome, this could be hills, rivers, lakes, desserts, etcetera. I like your terrain on your plot, however it needs some improvement. Rather than using so much play, try stone, andestie and small amounts of grey clay. Apart from that the shape and the drops are well done.
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  9. Structure- Your castle... I like the initial shape of it with the turrets. But I wish I saw more of it, maybe you should bring it forward a few blocks to show a little of the side of the castle. You do have a little depth too (layers of detail on the walls, rather than it being flat.) But not enough, I'd like to see more detail on the walls. Also, I think the colour scheme (the choice of block and block colours used) for the castle. I'd recommend more stone blocks, cut stone, stone bricks, etc with a little clay.
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  11. Organics- The organics of a plot are the tree's, flowers, bushes and the like for the terrain. I think the tree's are very sweet, but maybe try making them a little bigger. Also, add more bushes, and put flowers on the grass and the like. If this is meant to be a castle, the environment has to sell the story.
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  13. As I've said, I see potential in your plot! I think you could go far.
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  15. Thanks for taking the time to read.
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  17. ~HeyItsElla
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