Tayter_Kat

Grazinggoat22

Aug 20th, 2015
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  1. Hello there Grazinggoat22, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have a house but it is lacking major depth. Depth is the layers within a structure. I recommend adding some depth by incorporating slabs, stairs, fences, trap doors, and buttons either onto or into the sides of the structure. if you need a visual example of depth, try visiting /warp depthtutorial.
  5. Terrain:
  6. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. Your terrain is very flat and bulky. I would try making it more realistic by adding hills, cliffs, craters, etc. Make sure it was smooth and not boxy. IF you make it smooth, it will make it more realistic and more appealing. Make sure its not messy and all the blocks make sense. I also say to either get rid of the top layer or bottom layer as it does not make sense together.
  7. Organics:
  8. This is anything living, like animals and trees. You have none of these so I suggest adding them all around your plot. Make sure you make them your self instead of using bonemeal and saplings. make sure everything is proportional.
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  10. Fix the things mentioned above and you will be good to go! good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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