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- Hey there! :3
- I remember what I said in my review of this plot, and I like the additions you've made!
- However, there's still a lot of empty space on the plot! Some of the little details you've added are good, some more of those in places would be good! I think you should also add some larger trees, larger structures and some pathways around places.
- The organic inside the cave is okay, but I'd suggest a different palette than lapiz. The lapiz makes it look a little cartoonish.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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