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Misc "background details":
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>calling the police "Burning Rangers" or "Fire Fighters"
>Burning mailmen
>street signs (forget the reason for this, but it's good to remember)
>giant kitchen knives in BG of restaraunt (looks like Tetsucabra's greatsword)
>Ram air intakes on Lamorak's wolf
>Copier room in Wickerish INC
>El Grande laughing like "JAWJAWJAWJAWJAWJAW"
>Berlioz defaulting to medieval gauntlets, for Max (Lamorak fight)



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Details for the art, and what I need to address/improve:
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>distinguishing facial structures
>>>VERY GOOD, SHOULD THINK OF ASAP>>>ads for fictional products
>more creative use of camera angles (ask Pap, read more comics)



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Story ideas:
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>King's Men being King's Men shouldn't be hidden knowledge, since you need to defeat each one to face Prometheus
	>>>>IMPORTANT>>>>they (Wickerish crew) can't be surprised anymore, that Blackjack is one. NEED TO ADDRESS
	>regarding Blackjack, each finger has two attempts

Max's Past (interlude)
>have obscured imagery of Max and Gienne after Game attack, when Max is recounting past
>actually *does* want to be inspirational. Part of the performance and reason he put on such a spectacle in the ring.

>REMOVE COINCIDENCES
	>Game that attacked Max is NOT Sally
	>the girl Max saves isn't the restaraunt girl's sister
		>instead, Max is just popular with kids, that one's sister included, still, due to his presentation and (relatively) recent withdrawal from the ring

>>>>IMPORTANT (soonest "unplanned" thing)>>>>Lamorak fight starts as a chase scene
	>when leading into it (explaining plans, in a meeting), when the issue of just *catching* Lamorak is raised, (and it's explained why Max can't just Kickstart, see "he's like a bullet. Can't turn or control himself in midair.") he offers to chase him on the Shooting Star (his bike) and laughs off the damage it'll incur ("Eh, she's built from scrap, to begin with. A few weeks in the junkyard and she'll be fine.")
	>problem of "well now you need a weapon" is then brought up, to which the camera focuses on Max petting Berlioz, and asks "what?"
	>>>>>GOOOOD SHIT>>>>>have the overall "chase" part play out like Initial D

>Prometheus saying
	>Prometheus: "IT'S A PERFECT FUSION OF SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST, AND PHILOSOPHER KING! AND JUST LOOK AT THE RESULTS, IT MADE *YOU*"
	>Max: "Yeah, well it also made *you*."
>Game don't normally eat eachother, Prometheus had to specifically force them to do so. (need reason for "how." the "why" is easy enough, he reasoned that since Game are amalgamations of dead souls, reborn into one being, that grow stronger through consumption of living souls, just having them cannibalize eachother would supercharge their evolution. Maybe he locked them in a room and conditioned them to fight, you can certainly get animals to do that, even if we specifically don't know how.)
>>>>>"End Game Was Taken" being a deliberate recurring theme.
	>"End Game" referring to "hopes and dreams. What goals you're striving for." And "End Game Was Taken" refers to how a common theme is the main characters having their hopes and dreams, dashed, and having to adapt to what life throws at them.
		>Sally = wanting to live a normal life
		>Papi = wanting to be a sukeban
		>Max = wanting to be the number one boxer (though he later decides to switch to number one Ender, since that'd involve beating Gienne)
		>Gienne = wanting to best Max on his own merits
		>El Grande = wanting to be able to support himself and his family, in his own country, but needing to move to where more opportunity is
		>Prometheus =
		>etc
MAX VS GIENNE:
	>starburst (obviously)
	>Max tautning Gienne (potentially even have Gienne angrily ask how he's talking at normal speed, if he's moving perceiving shit faster, and Max goes "SLOWLY!")
	>>>>COOL SHIT HERE, SON>>>> Max dealing rapid blows, Gienne doesn't even move, laughs it off, and then starts getting violently pummeled by (seemingly) the air in front of him
		>the reality being Max punched him so god damned fast, that it took PHYSICS ITSELF a few seconds to register the damage to Gienne
		>(revel in the audaicity and stupidity of this^^^)





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Misc ideas for shit that'd just be neat to draw:
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>Sally in suspenders, dress pants, button up, a general "newsie" kind of look, if that's the term
>reversing the curl for Sally's hair, to make a pompadour (sort of like Tangle the Leemur's "fade" if that's the term.)
>>>DO IT, IT'LL BE RAD>>>"Wanderer Over a Sea of Fog" but it's Max and Excaliburgh