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- Hello AlexandrosG!
- I am xDraghun and today I will be reviewing your plot again ! :D I would like to say that your plot looks much cleaner and more nicer than last time, so you're showing improvement. I'll make it short and simple since you have even less things to work on. Lets start on your structure.
- You structure has some really nice detail but it is still lacking depth. Try to work on it and again for reference, go to /warp depthtutorial. You bridge still needs work and try to stick with a main block as the base.
- Your trees look far better than last time, and I dont rly have any problems with them. You should still practice them in the future. I recommend you get rid of the statue in general.
- You terrain is nice and has good variation and detail. You farmland looks weird and should have more dirt blocks than water sources. Try to reshape and smoothen your hills.
- Overall, I could tell you should be ranking up very soon. Try to work on these small things and then you could possibly be ranked. Good Luck! :D
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