JJOCT7 R2M16 Jojolity

Judge Elihu Smails (Arch)

As for Jojolities, I have little to say. Ashok presented some excellent means of sabotage. However, I found that they focused more on practicality than any particular flair to their actions. This could be inherent to the list formatting, but in any case, I’m going to give their Jojolity a 6.

David, however, definitely brought some style to his golfing, taking risky shots with the jagged rocks and in the hazards, playing up the drama of his game through posturing and skill. This is a performance, and David is doing exceedingly well. Thus, I’m giving his Jojolity a 7. Well done!

Judge Billy Madison (Alpha)

Golf Stylishly, my friends! Stay Beautiful! Some other third line I can steal from an anime I watched as a teen!

The point here was to golf stylishly and sabotage in just the same, meaning that points for style accrue from both methods, rather than letting one out-stellar the other to make up scores.

Starting with David again, I can directly pinpoint the kind of style we have here. He’s a younger version of the antagonist of Caddyshack, letting himself ‘rule’ the green with his own way.

Here’s here to break your stuff and sell you his, join the local country club, and rub elbows with people in his places. Networking is important, ya know?

There are honest attempts made to adhere to this sort of character, with the active subtle sabotages and the point-backed self-evidence of David forcing his way to the top, one green at a time.

While I can recognize a good antagonist, the strat wasn’t married to either idea. It felt more like David was using and abandoning his seeming overbearing-ness between plays, and muting his own sabotages to keep people from noticing anything. I feel comfortable giving this a **6**, all told.

Ah, the opposite approach. The Ty Cobb hiring a baggie that’s actually decent at golf kind of play. The apparent rookie entering the field to hustle his way to victory kind of play. I see you.

Beneath the technical wall, we have its narrative use; Ashok is here to sell himself as the newbie, going from square one, asking about the rules and keeping the legalities of being able to run under the ball to keep himself in range, and keeping to each and every bit point he’s selling.

From the first lucky shot to the many back-and-forth rolls at the sink, to the green play, every little detail being peppered in from the start and lasting all the way to the devilish grin at the final set is tops.

I will commend you for marrying the idea of Ashok hustling his crowd from the word go to the word stop, but I will also admit that you need more than spice to make a dish. You certainly have the flavor, but the meat is lacking. In more ethical terms, right flavor, but it sits on the tongue long enough to make you hungrier. I can see giving this a **7**.

Judge Tiger Woods (Flame)

“Be stylish in your golfing and your sabotage!” Both players work on their style, in both golfing and sabotage: with David acting the gentleman and planning to outshine Ashok with various trickshots and simple but creative sabotage (and petty trippage to boot), but Ashok likewise utilising trickshots to his advantage while passing himself off as a simple newcomer to the sport along with a wide array of Mandate-based sabotages. I’ve considered giving the former a 6, but ultimately have decided that both strategies will be scoring a **7**!