Tayter_Kat

Sneakzone0400

Jul 20th, 2015
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  1. Hello Sneakzone0400, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have a couple of structures with depth, but I want to teach you how to do depth and take it a step further. Depth is the layers within a building/structure. You have some depth, but if you continue using this style, you wont rank past Novice. SO in this case, I want to teach you how to do depth and make it unique at the same time! You can use slabs, stairs, fences, buttons, and trap doors as blocks that add depth into a structure. If you need an example of depth, visit /warp depthtutorial. This shows you good and bad examples of depth, and how to add depth properly. Also, make sure you don't copy, but instead try making your own pattern!
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have a great amount of organics all around your plot. Your tree also looks great for an initiate plot, so Great Job!!!!
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. Some of your plot is a bit flat. Try adding more hills and craters all along the plot to make it more real, and to match everything else. The rest looks great!
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  10. Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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