Godivas: Welcome m'dear~
Godivas: SO, I don't know if you've been shown this yet, but this our hangout room for whever we all just want to chill together ^^
Demonstia: i need to change my outfit
Demonstia: im sorry
Demonstia: lol
Demonstia: an no i haven't seen it yet
Godivas: Hey hey all good, wear whatever you want in here LOL
Godivas: Come and take a seat when you're all ready ^^
Demonstia: i like this
Demonstia: everything is costum
Godivas: Right? Kieran is our lord and savior LOL
Demonstia: He made all this?
Demonstia: oh wow
Godivas: Yes ma'am~
Godivas: Give me just a moment to pull up your application.
Demonstia: Play
Demonstia: okay***
Demonstia: z
Godivas: LOL
Demonstia: its been a long day of being lazy
Demonstia: Lool
Godivas: So lazy that I literally have mcdonalds rn
Demonstia: Like, i wanna go get mexican. But i dont wanna sit down and eat there
Demonstia: Nor do i wanna leave my bed
Godivas: ..Grubhub maybe? DOORDASH
Demonstia: See, i live in the middle of no where. They don't have it
Godivas: And by the time you get home it'd be luke warm.. gotcha.
Godivas: Okay SO.
Godivas: I've just ready over your lapdance example.
Godivas: And you're doing well, you've got the hang of it. And more importantly, the length. Which I am so glad about it. You have to know when to fight para with para. So I'm glad to see you are capable of doing so.
Demonstia: I like paragraphs over one or two words.
Demonstia: It helps get the feel of it better.
Godivas: I agree immensely. So what I can see from the first read is your very repititve, and that's where most of the issue lies with everyone I've had in training. They struggle to find synonms relatively close to it. Which is no problem, that's what I'm here for. Playfully, And, & Hands were overused so we're gonna flip that around.
Demonstia: This is not the first time i've had a problem with using the word and.
Demonstia: My third grade teacher said the same thing. I remember it
Godivas: Now, depending on how advanced we do get you, They may be some homework, such as writing/practicing your own fiction, reading some excerts. Apart from that, far into your training because there will be multiple sessions, no girl, no matter how good only gets one. This way we can note your progress and see if you're advancing at a close angle. This also means you'll be roleplaying with me (if comfortable) so you can reply to real life- detailed responses. I've found it much harder, personally when there's no one to react or reply to. And yes, it can make a sentence carry on too long and sound messy. You're supposed to be able to say a sentence in one breath. That's the trick.
Demonstia: I am 100% okay with how all that sounds. I dont mind doind any of that. If it helps and makes my roleplaying better, it sounds like a great plan.
Godivas: So, we are going to do some roleplay training as well as a little bit of etiquette if we can get to that today.
Godivas: Awesome, I love that you're replying with full sentences and not words LOL.
Demonstia: I only do one word when mad LOL. One word replies irritate me
Godivas: After this session today, I do ask that when you're clocked in and you do a stage tease/lapdace please screenshot your responses. This is for me to see what we need to work on for next time as we can pinpoint the issue. I usually like 1 or 2 screenshots before scheduling or next session.
Godivas: ii
Godivas: our**
Godivas: With that being said, go on and give me an example of your best stage tease. A client has come into the room, taken a seat infront of you, and slid a gift at the bottom of your feet. One gift on stage means topless, please try to incorporate that ^^
Godivas: (( I have to use the BR brb rq ))
Godivas: ((okay~))
Demonstia: (i just got back from the bathroom myself sorry i didn't say anything)
Godivas: (All good )
Demonstia: (when on stage is there a certain format you use for the tease? like the /me)
Godivas: (yes, this is just like as if it was happenig in the club))
Godivas: Happening**
Demonstia: /me She looked down at the client and winked. She reached around the clamps of her bra unhooking them one by one. The straps fell off her shoulders and her bra lowered down on her chest. Her hair swung off to the side, letting the bra slide off slowly. Letting it fall down onto the stage she used her hands to push her hair back. Hips swaying to the music in the room she lowered her self so he could get a better view.
Demonstia: (( would you like for me to sit in the back as well for training so im not on stage
Demonstia: ))
Godivas: You can if you'd like, I just did that because I'm going to type you paragraphs through each sentence and I wouldn't welcome a client on time. You're welcome to stay on until a client comes in if you'd like. But if one does, I request your full attention here, hence you can then into the back with me~
Godivas: Okay so, that was not bad at all. Good job. What I'm going to do is pick apart and scrounge through every nook and cranny of every sentence that you've given me. With that being said, I'll applaud and critiscize you at the same time. Let's being.
Godivas: Your very first mistake was adding 'She' to that first sentence. So when you read it, it looks like "Demonstia She looked down" The 'she' is already incoporated as your user name. Think about it, /me. /me looked down. Demonstia looked down. Just for future reference of course ^^
Demonstia: Yes ma'am that is noted.
Godivas: The thing is, you have the length of a fairly average lapdance covered. But it's not long enough and is missing quite a few details that you could easily lengthen. You looked down and winked at the man. Did anything catch your eye? Maybe nicely combed hair? Sparkling yet dark eyes? Tattoos? What about the music playing, is it slow and sexy or loud and crazy? It's tic for tac, essentially.
Godivas: Now what you did immediately in the second sentence was take your bra off. This is a stage tease, so you really want to make that client want more. You want to /tease/ Having a strap slip down your shoulder one one side, carefully unhook every clasp on the back of your bra as you suck your lip between your canines and chew on it. Just add as you go rather. But before I would've taken my top off, I would've started dancing a little bit, but every dancers style is different and we encourage that ^^
Godivas: You also dedicated a sentence to fixing your hair, but the jump from sliding it off slowly and ending the sentence to it falling and fixing your hair was not a smooth transformation. We'll work on that, so it doesn't seem as choppy, rather.
Godivas: Your hips swaying to the music as you lowered yourself for him to get a better view.. okay. Sway is used a lot, how about.. Gyrated, swirled, twirled, rocked, rolled?.. You'd be able to do this action multiple times throughout, especially in a lapdance if you just change up the vocabulary, and then it's easy from there on out.
Demonstia: When it comes to dancing my mind always draws up blanks and sway is the first word i think of. I guess i can just take a second and think about other words i can use to make is more smooth
Godivas: Which is understandable. Trust me, we've all been there. But we've all learned, taught ourselves, and grown our vocabulary into something we're proud of it. Our goal, is to make you the absolute best you can be, to the best of your abilities. We're going to open your mind and discover new words, actions, and even other knowledge if needed.
Godivas: With that being said, I'm going to give you an example of my stage tease that I have done. So you can kinda see the level we want to get you up to. Sound good?
Demonstia: Yeess, i would love to see yours
Godivas: /me released a deep, mellowed breath that reverbed low in the back of her throat. Her chocolate-colored orbs flicking about the gentle yet anticipating features lining along the broad and defined man in her sights. "Well.. Normally I'd say thank you for the gift.. But, actions speak louder than words, don't they m'love?" The nonchalant question tripped off the delicate tip of her tongue, like a rarity of the French. She slipped the soft muscle through her parted lips and slicked up the glossed flesh, leaving a sheer layer of a more prominent glimmer. Within in an instant, her hips had gradually initiated a tender sway; rocking carefully side to side with a hint of small figure eights to the tune that roared loudly through the club.  She had now flattened her palms against the subtle pudge of her tummy, her digits webbed out as she began to tauntingly drag the sharpened nails along her goose-bump ridden skin; deliberately scraping her smooth complexion as she left a few light rosy marks. The deep profound red ambiance interluding above them while flashing at a relaxed, intimate pace. "How about.. we head upstairs and you let me claim that lap of yours?" Her tone hurried yet sweet, murmured yet deafening as a few more gifts found their way to  her side of the stage. "Patience, patience.." She tsk'd him teasingly, waggling her clawed digit at him. "Restrain just a little longer for me. Can't miss the best part, can we?" She clicked at the inside of her cheek before allowing the corner of her mouth to flit up into the form of a mischievous smirk while her hands disappeared behind her back; fingertips toying with the zipper of her one-piece, an unheard sound of the ridges being torn apart as she simply unzipped the material. In one quick motion, she let the leather suit fall off her shoulders and slip down her curvaceous figure to simply step out of it. Sporting nothing besides a pretty skimpy pair of white panties; her breasts now entirely exposed and vulnerable as she flicked her hair behind her shoulders while her show of confidence stirred. "Come on sweetheart, let's see what you're made of." As her gaze glared intently into his, she relished in how he fixed his hand in hers and complied with such excitement.
Demonstia: i love that so much
Demonstia: it's like i could visual it
Godivas: Ah, thank you ^^ That's the point, most people rely on the context, rather than the pixels. Roleplay is turly #1.
Godivas: truly*** oop
Demonstia: Yess, i've never read something that detailed though.
Demonstia: Sorry my replies are kinda short, my mom is taking me out for my birthday dinner tonight i'm getting dressed at the moment
Godivas: There's.. me and 2 other that are able to roleplay at that lev-
Godivas: YOUR BIRTHDAY?
Godivas: TODAYS YOUR BIRTHDAY?
Demonstia: NONO
Demonstia: it's on monday
Demonstia: but i won't be home lol
Godivas: Oop,not at all during the day? Because we like to take a theme that a girl wants really badly and make it for her birthday.. are you suuure?
Demonstia: I'll be home during the evening. Just out during the day
Godivas: Well, are you planning on clocking in that evening?~
Demonstia: There's a big chance i will.
Godivas: Okay, we'll talk about that after your training because we'll want you to pick a theme and we'll set it as a club and everyone will be dressed however you decide.
Godivas: Do you have to go shortly due to your dinner?
Demonstia: in like the next 30 mins probably.
Demonstia: It was unexpected so i am not prepared
Godivas: That's perfectly fine, I understand that. Usually we'd move on to the lapdance example, disect that and go through it all but it won't be done within 30 minutes.
Godivas: So let's do a little etiquette training. Easy peasy
Demonstia: Okay ^^
Godivas: So, basically etiquette is how you carry yourself here in the club. Every girl has their own style.. brand, signature item/object. For instance, Lilo(Smootch) has her ginger hair and 90% scaler. She's a short little thing. We have Katie, who you have not met yet; who is a cute little minx who wears a kitty tail and ears. And I, switch between light and dark, there's not really anything in between. But the horns on my head never come off, for anything. That's my signature. So, if you have something you'd like to always keep on yourself at all times.. or a certain hair color/eye color. It's distinctive. Although that's next to nothing what etiquette is about, I just thought you'd like something of your own.
Godivas: Now, when you enter the club. From the entrance you see the two poles on both sides. The stage with one center dot, one dot on the left of it, one dot on the right. Then one in the back. The goal for that is to keep it easy on the eyes. So if I were to clock in first, I'd take the midde spot, or back spot. Those are the only 2 options you have if you're first in the room. If you come in 2nd. You can move to the back spot or the front dot depending on where the first person is at. If I'm in the middle front spot, I have to move to a dot to the left or right, an then you take the opposite dot so we're covering both sides. We could also take both poles, or we could also do the 2 girl dance back there. The whole thing is abotu symmetry and not making it an eyesore.
Godivas: about*
Demonstia: That does make a lot of sense. and the spot thing does make a lot of sense to me now
Demonstia: I am so sorry to cut this short. But i have to get going.i am being rushed out my house at the moment
Godivas: Now, when you look through all the girls, we have some classy, some polite, some desperate and damn good at it, some innocent, some dark. It's essentially known as who they are. Which incoporates how they talk to clients. It is veeery important that you sell yourself in such a way that makes them remember you, or come back for more if they have no time left etc. Your initial impression is what draws them to you. For instance, most if not all the girlsm myself guilty, has just welcomed clients with "Welcome to Devour, (blank) come on in, rate 5 stars, get comfy.) Which is mediocre. Plain. Boring. So when that happens, welcoming or not, it all looks the same. Let's say you've entered the club. I have to quickly click your profile, look at your tagline/interests/outfit and try to pick a creative one from there. SOMETIMES you can't, sometimes they have nothing. But it would go a little like this-
Godivas: ALL GOOD
Godivas: I"LL SAVE THIS CHAT
Godivas: GO HAVE FUN